by BarbaraG
The story, while interesting and even moving, is not really an erotic tale. Even though there is some sex in it.
It reads more like a biography. With some minor changes, it could have run in Cosmopolitan. That's not to say it's a bad story, just that it's not a story for people looking for sexual thrills.
An erotic tale would have been giving us the joy of discovery in her first girl-girl encounter. Or the younger son and daughter hopping into bed after getting all heated up talking about Mom coming out. Or even the first girlfriend seducing the daughter.
It was just what a hopeless romantic needed!!! It is great to know that there is true fortion to be had!!