All Comments on 'Marcus Bleak and the Sex Robots Ch. 06'

Damn I didn't see that coming!!! Thanks for another exciting and erotic chapter in the life of Marcus Bleak!!

I hate you now even more.

Why do we have to wait??

The story is too complicated with a little too much suspension of disbelief required.

Usually, it's best to base a science fiction story on just one unlikely (or impossible) premise and build your story from that, rather than introducing more requirements for suspension of disbelief by the reader. Here you have robots, bionics, teleportation, time travel, etc.

This is meant as constructive criticism. I will read more chapters when you post them.