All Comments on 'Marcus of Duros Ch. 05'

I like the fact of you having pointed out that even in our own society, women have their own secret meetings with one another - as a male, that has always made me suspicious, and in a society where they get special training on how to control the males - still heading towards a matriarchy.

You are more methodical and planned ahead on how to end your chapters than I am (maybe that's why I haven't had the guts to put my own in front of others yet) as my own stories appear to be character driven, and seem to get away from anything I had thought I planned for them to accomplish. Your way seems better, but I haven't mastered that yet.

GandoldTheWise