All Comments on 'Mariana at the Movies'

by Erica_Gasca

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

loved it--3 stars {5 stars with some of the typos and misspellings corrected}

You need to proof read, t6hen wait a few days and proof it again.

Will6969doWill6969doover 9 years ago
Great tale of --------

-------- a young slut to be. I'm sure you will see that she earns her sluthood!

CarnaleyeCarnaleyeover 13 years ago
Loved It!

Lovely Fuckingly delightful story Erica. Wondurfully narrated!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hot story

Man I truly love sex in the theatre

ljaljaover 16 years ago
very nice :-)

Ty Erica for giving me a nice erection. I loved your story and please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It's so poor that I couldn't even finish

Are you about 12? Did you read some dirty stories in you're daddys collection of grade F porno books? The sad part is that you've received a couple of positive comments. Oh well, so much for the mental capability of those reaaders!

Friskee_cplFriskee_cplover 16 years ago
Straight to the point

Yeah pretty good for a stroke story. You certainly cut to the chase but occasionally I like that.

Good on you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
In two stories you have written about a 28d, what

does this refer to, perhaps her thigh size? Were you to find a girl with a 28d chest she would be very small, say less than four feet tall?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great story

You wrote a great story. It was sexy and very stimulating. Your story gave me a nice erection. That's what I wanted. Thank you for doing it. Keep writing erotic stories. They'll do a lot of men a lot of good. Again, thank you.

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