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All Comments on 'Marie's Submission Ch. 02'

by jakeball69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Absolutely terrific!!!

You have something special here Jakeball69. Stay creative and keep pushing the limits. This can last for many, many chapters without losing intensity.

Well Done

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
DARK AND AWESOME!!!

Twisted and sick, I loved it. Keep on with the great character development. The storyline is neat and clean.

I can't wait for your next submission.

Thank you,

Joel

FreddyKneeChiFreddyKneeChiover 19 years ago
One of the better NC tales I've read in awhile

It is very good already and has a lot of potential. Please continue writing.

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