All Comments on 'Marie's Young Lover'

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QuillmanQuillmanover 13 years ago
Nice story

A gentle, unhurried and well written story. Able to get in the mindset of both participants - always a good sign.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Beautiful

You could feel the author progressing on tip-toe trying not to break the erotic mood that was developing. Definitely a story that needs a chapter 2 etc. etc. Very definitely !!

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

***Good read. Thanks for sharing.

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