All Comments on 'Marigolds'

The story had a good beginning, but felt like it ended in a rush. Why not describe Kevin's encounter with the stranger at the front door instead of just the aftermath? And the last paragraph begs for a continuation. Does the stranger allow Kevin to participate with Felicity? Does Felicity leave with the stranger? Does the stranger come back as a regular visitor? There are some things that are implied, but I would love to see further development. I think you laid a strong foundation for it.

Pretty pedestrian to be perfectly honest.