All Comments on 'Marrying Brother Ch. 05'

This is a very good story. You present good detail of the breast-milk sucking and the fucking of the brother and sister. It was sexually arousing. Well done. I enjoyed the idea of the women fucking their brothers to get pregnant. Delightful. Please continue writing.

this is so much more arousing than the '04 story I read moments ago. next time you write, close your eyes and record the juicy details as you imagine them while masturbating yourself--wet, toungey kisses, erotic talk, twisted nipples, slapped asses, teasing by the dominant partner, more vivid descriptions of nipples, cocks and sexy costumes--as you go. the story, tho' much improved, needs more sexual tension, more playing-out of the hot, driven encounters. Tell it exactly like you feel it when you are stroking your own cunt and imagining an impossibly erotic experience. I can tell yr putting a lot of effort into yr stories. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching your stories on literotica.

This has got to be the freakiest shit I've ever read...and I LOVE it!

Everybody is doing everybody. And here I thought I was a kinky fucker but I see I've been beat!

please make marraige ceremony in outdoor , abandon temple, river side, forest, hiltop, khet, etc..

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