All Comments on 'Marte's Challenge No. 1'

The title did not really impress me, but I was very struck by the story itself. Would love to be witness to such an event.

as fantasies go this is one of my all time favorites i loved the way it played out to a perfect end want more like this soon please. "jakk"

mmmm god i would luv to do that to someone, even more of a turn on being in terra and cindys shoes than martes... excellent ...

I love in public remote-controlled masturbation stories (lol...so specific). The way you drew it out was lovely, and the little detail of her biting the table, mm.

Stunning. Wow.

OK, enough one word comments. Your storytelling skills are quite enjoyable. I found this series on a random spin and decided to start at the beginning. I love when a writer lets readers into the character's mind, and you did that incredibly well. I know you've written more already, and I'm eager to check out No. 2. Thanks.

My orgasm from this was so long and intense that I literally couldn't breathe for a few seconds.