All Comments on 'Marte's Challenge No. 2'

I liked the scene. The voyeuristic aspect was nice, but didn't have the same tension as Challenge No. 1. Still, it was hot. Keep writing.

This was very good. I liked the first challange better but this was good too. I love how much detail you give. And how you really let a reader into the characters minds. Its hot, and I get so wet reading your stories. Keep writing.