All Comments on 'Martha Finally Cheats Too Often'

Too violent he didnt need to go that far. She cheated so divorce and embarrass the bitch not do this shit.

This one gave me the creeps. He predators got what they deserved and the wife deserved divorce, but for the husband to go coward by taking all the money and never talking with her says alot about his character.

5 stars.

I really have no problem with his actions. Cheating is the worst way you can treat a spouse.

Only problem was he retired to the Philippines. The problem is I'm pretty sure they have an extradition treaty with the US. Though it's corrupt enough to slip through the cracks it seems it would be far too risky. If it wasn't for that though that place is pretty much perfect for his plan.

Amen to last comment. And actually yes, adultery is not just bad, its AWFUL, it leaves the victims with what mental health professionals consider to be akin to PTSD at best, and give the in"justice" "family" courts in this country, basically destroyes a man's life. So yeah, a bit of disfigurement seems warranted, especially in fiction.

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The two problems with this story are the opposite: first, the REAL criminal, the wife, isn't actually harmed physically. Minor negative given what he's done to her otherwise (mainly, destroyed her relationship to her kids, what most cheating wives do to their victims; and destroyed her financially, again what she'd have done to him if

he went the "civilized" route and tried to divorce her cheating ass.

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Second, the stupid "waiting to see if at any time she'd remember, change her ways, come back to him and the family" thing at the end that almost cost the story 1-2 stars for being so disgustingly cucky. What bloody difference would it have made if she changed her ways and "come back" to him? he'd STILL have had a cheating lying betraying cuntface bitch for a "wife", and no self respect or peace.

Ok, it is just a story so get off your long winded virtue signaling.

Did you also complain about the 3 Stooges and how hurtful they were?

We watched that and most never hit their friends with a hammer.

We understood it was fiction and not real. I am sorry to have to share the "LW universe" with such reality challenged people.

I am sorry that I have to share the LW universe with people who actually applaud the violence displayed in this story. Adultery is bad but but not a reason to disfigure permanently physically disfigure the transgressors. The wife will confess, and the husband will be caught and left to spend some of his best years in prison.

I stress that most, if not all, the mentally-challenged commentators who have complimented the story's outcome have done so as "Anonymous." It is telling that the same jack-offs who would support this kind of violence are so ball-less that they even refuse to post under a pseudonym.

Regarding the last "Anonymous," I hope that someone decides that a mistake or failing in your life deserves to have your wife's and you genitals. tongue and fingers cut off. It doesn't matter what your are guilty of--perhaps jacking-off too much--because you have set up yourself as the judge and executioner. I would have no empathy for you. You are delusional as well because Tome was not forced into anything. He had a choice and decided to act as an animal, and so he hopefully will be treated as such. Regarding your flight-of-fancy regarding a police mind-set, it is just as likely that the cops are the perps who commit adultery and would want to punish someone who would castrate them. Your delusions just go to show how you are too stupid to think beyond your undersized little cock.

Re: Carvohi

What kind of sick fuck are you that only has empathy for individuals who spend their time destroying marriages?

Tom, was faced with a wretched dilemma his slut wife forced him into. He chose the best possible outcome to allow himself to be able to look at himself in the mirror. It could be argued that she drove him to a state of insanity. Carvohi, you asshole, SHE drove him to take the actions he did.

And there was another commenter that said that the daughters would have taken the wifes side in real life. Did the part about the slut denigrating her daughters during her debauchery not register with them?

I have come back to read this story many times when the proliferation of cuck crap is just overwhelming. I just hate the whining and hand-wringing of the cuck population about justified retribution. Police would not be looking too hard for Tom since there was no murder, merely mutilation. And being police, they've probably had cheating slut wives themselves as that profession has a proliferation of divorce due to cheating slut wives and wouldn't want to go after someone they admired for taking charge the way they wish they could have. He disappeared, done and gone. The pieces of shit he left in his wake should just live with the consequences of their actions.

I came back to read this story for perhaps the 8th time today, 01/23/23 because the offerings on the page today. Cuck after cuck story. Disgusting. This one cleanses the literary palate nicely. I still think that a follow-up from Matin and Sybil's post Tom encounter could be uplifting for people like myself who get satisfaction from seeing people like them get their comeuppance.

Just read this story for the 4th time. My only complaint is that it's too short. Could have been fleshed out with year to year accounts of the slut experiencing signs her murder might be eminate. It would also have been good to hear some of Martin and Sybil's thoughts on their new reality. What's it like having no nipples?, only ring and pinkie fingers?, balls to produce testosterone but no dick to express it?, a sewn up pussy? I would have liked to hear from them if they thought the life they'd lived to that point was worth it? What was their encounter with Tom like that final night? After more than 2 years of disrespect and humiliation, how did they feel while he returned the humiliation with disfigurement and mutilation? A follow up detailing that would be great.

I would have preferred more violence , but it was good enough for five stars regardless

Perfect

This is EXACTLY what should to cheaters! Leave them the ability to experience desire (the man kept his balls), but make it difficult to orgasm (penis removed, maybe he can learn to cum from prostate stimulation). This leaves the villain in a state of constant torment.

The wife was wrong-the tongues and fingers weren’t removed to stop them from testifying! Look at what else is removed: everything that touched the wife!

ZK

Of cours this storys of cheating wifes and chuckholding, on this side, are (so I hope) fictional storys. It s nice to read a glims of reality. I enjoy the fictional reveng of the husband.

pointless

Wow, who is this "Giggle" character? Besides being my hero! He's summarized the moral woes of our society today.

FTDS, we miss you soo much. The landscape on this site lately has just been overwhelmingly packed with cuckold, faggot crap. I skim, and read maybe 4-5 stories a week. I want mire of what's presented in this story but I realize it takes some talent to produce good work. The majority of the writers on this site are lazy bastards who go for the easy circumstance.

The violence in this one was too much. Yes they were disgusting but it was the wife who was cheating and a divorce where everyone was told why would have been enough.

Being publicly humiliated by releasing video would have hung around them all for years. His actions are that of a psychopath.

Revenge for years of cheating... sure, why not? It was extreme, but not disgustingly so. It was a shame about the cheater's suicide, though.

Best story I've read on this site in months .

Thank you .

Death always puts and end to the suffering...and that kills the story here.....

What a psycho, that shits not okay, revenge yeah but not that far. Wife and neighbors are scum but tom is fucked up beyond scum.

Going through the entire "Revenge" category looking for this story to read again. This might be the best burn of all time. Again, the only fault I find is the brevity of it. It would have been delicious to hear of the torture, mutilation and consequences from Marty and Sybil's perspective. I understand they survived, how's life treating them nowadays? That's what would have put the perfect bow on this gem of a story.

You know you've hit a literary home run when when all the Literotica slime crawl out from under their rocks to whine and moan about "There was no cum slurping bla bla bla..."

What goes around come around. Its Karma I guess. 5 stars

He sure had a long time to plan is ultimate revenge and I bet he changed it two or three times tweeted it here and there, but to leave them TrueType death mutes like he did was most wicked in a good way 😂🤭

Sometimes when a scorched earth approach is taken, the author fumble in their attempts. For as heavy handed as this was, it was doled out perfectly. great job!

Another cheating slut wife gone

WHAT A STORY. That'll learn'em. 5*****

And yet, you only finish the same kind of stories (cheating wive) and always the same way (husband revente).

Amen Giggle, all those evil creeps got what they had coming period!!! And I’m the same about murderers who get life instead of a rope around their wicked necks...a least I get some satisfaction from good stories like this one...😃

I don't read stories like this for their own sake, I read them so the comments will amuse me more. Holy hell - the amount of people sympathizing with a woman who deliberately destroyed her family.... "over the top"? Not hardly.

It may surprise you to learn that men have hearts and love their wives in a way that most women simply don't seem capable of understanding. Check out the stats on men dying of heart attacks after losing their wives sometime. Compare that to the stats of women dying after losing their husbands.

That's what whores like the one depicted in this story give up - what they destroy. What the husband destroyed was an ugly thing - a disgusting thing. What she destroyed was sacred and beautiful. Comparing the two in any way is insanity or stupidity, or both.

And hell, he gave her two years to stop. Two years he'd have been willing to take her back despite being a disgusting whore. Two years to realize what she was doing was wrong. She never did, because she wasn't a human being. She wasn't capable of love, empathy, or self reflection, and if you can't do those things you are not a person.

In a way, I think every single one of the people commenting in favor of the wife are WORSE than the wife herself. You're defending evil, which in a way is worse than evil itself - it's people like you, every minute of day of every year - that allow people to suffer and die, starve, suffer persecution and oppression, or take their own lives.

On your heads lie the evils of this world and you bear every shame imaginable in your complicity.

To get the viewpoint of Martin and Sybil as they adjusted to their new lifestyle in the year or so after Tom's nighttime visit. Maybe even what was going through their minds as he let them know what he thought of the relationship they had with his "wife".

To Anonymous Wishing

Unfortunately, your wish will be in vain. FTDS was two people, and one, the prime mover, is no longer with us.

Oh Martha. If only you would have been faithful. If only you would have cared for your family like a good wife and mother does. Oh Martha oh Martha. Why did you betray us Martha?

Karma's a bitch!

I wish ftds would come back and start writing again😢😢😢

but????? nothing can stop the inevitable/ TK U MLJ LV NV

lesson to be learned here is never marry a psychotic whore .

she was probably insane her whole life but was able to keep it hidden .

the temptation is too much for an insane whore to keep bottled up her whole life and hidden .

her parents probably knew , she likely tortured men in her teens like the animals she tortured as a child .

I cant say I disagree with the sentiment though. And of course we have TR the whore apologist. Seriously why the hell do you always puss out and back the cheating whore to the wall and then some. the story is of course blatantly over the top, but short of the removal or their body parts, what level of Harsh punishment, like a beating to a pulp would you deem deserved? I'm genuinely curious because id have beat the fucking shit out of the two of them, and prob given the wife a good thrashing as well. The story had NO reason other than her being a selfish, unfaithful slut for what she did NONE. so lets hear it this ought to be good,

Lesson to be learned here is never marry a physcotic man. He was insane probably all his life but was able to keep it hidden. His wife's infidelity brought it out. Surprised his parents never noticed he probably tortured animals when he was a kid.

Some authors on this site-look in mirror-extol adultery and the humiliation of the husband.

Other authors take umbrage with cheating wives and their

predatory lovers.

Both types have their fans.

Applauding a husband being tied to a chair, cock in a cage, forced to be humiliated fulfills your fantasies.

This story fulfills the thoughts of those people who want justice carried out on sexual predators, date rapists, serial rapists and pedophiles.

Did FTDS go to far-depends on your perspective.

I have noticed how you castigate those who do not share your views on adultery. That is your right, as it is the rights of those diametrically opposed to your views to castigate you.

Did I spell that correctly-or is it castrate

Perhaps they are synonyms.

Well met sir....

Between an FTDS or a Carvohi story, it is FTDS every time. FTDS, never take advice from a second rate writer like Carvohi. Not everything you write is like Hemingway wrote it, but I have a number of your stories in my Favorites list. This is not your best story, but still very good. It won't go on my Favorites list but still worthy of 5-Stars.

"Ugly, Dark and Vicious". It was, and I love it. Exactly what a cheating slut deserves.

Five Stars.

I bet. Likely you are another whore. Me, I preferred this. Harsh but fair, lol.

This retaliatory tale is so utterly devoid of depth or meaning. It's simply infantile.

“I could even feel him a little” – Gee, thanks for small favors!

“gave my soul to my ungrateful family” – What do they have to be grateful for – a lying, cheating slut?

“It was one stupid mistake.” – ONE mistake?! That lasted for TWO years! And would have continued if Tom didn’t put a stop to it!

I'm not sure if I posted these before -

“I'd had one of the most frightening and disturbing days of my life, and my husband couldn't even have the decency to call to let me know he was going to be late.” – LOL, SHE’S one to talk about “decency”!

“I would have done anything to make it up to him, if he'd only given me one more chance.” – S-u-u-re you’d give up that big cock for Tom’s cock that you can “hardly feel”

“It was one stupid mistake” – ONE stupid mistake? It went on for t least two YEARS!

“sometimes even regretful” – SOMETIMES?!

but I loved the comment about the Martian Slut Ray. What a neat and succinct way to describe that absolute and total change that takes place in a person when first they practice to deceive.

You just gotta love a happy ending.

Of course, this story is totally immoral and way over the top but that is its beauty, as well. Revenge is an ugly part of life, and we must deal with conflict on our on terms. Governments have done it throughout history so have people in relationships gone bad. I may not agree personally with the actions of the protagonist but I enjoyed reading about it. This author is talented and bold. I feel the characters deserved some form of retribution for their bad behavior. If you've ever been betrayed, you experience a range of emotions that start as a thought prior to taking action. Then, you consider the ramifications for exercising your schemes and evaluate the risk from any backwash. This author skipped the last step and effected his plan in fantasy form. As a reader, I can exit a story at anytime I wish. I rated this five stars because it was enjoyable.

I think a lot of comments have missed the point of this story. This is a fantasy. Most men that have been cheated on, think about doing these types of things to the cheating parties. They usually don't because of any number of reasons but they still think about doing them. This author just took the darkest fantasies and wrote them in a story. How much humiliation does a person have to take before they snap and go off the deep end. Good job and thanks for finishing the story.

they just might not be able to Take-A-Joke. TK U MLJ LV NV

Should I feel guilty about that? I don't! Total fiction, thank God. Shallow selfish stupid women do not raise good daughters, nor attract good intelligent men as husbands. Just another case of Martian slut ray. God I hate those little green bastards!

And I won't. I'm sure it is full of whining about how 'over the top' it was..yada yadda yadda.

Where were they for the original? Wasn't what she did 'over the top'?

It's just a story, girls, so keep your panties on. If you have a weak constitution, that's your problem, no one else's. A random collection of words, organized in paragraphs, never hurt anyone, so if it offends, all the better. Your taking offence to EVERYTHING is of no consequence to the world, nor should it be! If people take offense to everything, then it becomes diluted, and means nothing. Their feelings are their responsibility, no one else's.

Thanks, FTDS, I enjoy a good mutilation story now and then, especially when it gets everyone up on their high horse (which I assume is the case here too), so Well Done!

For the read.

This bitch still did not have her mind right after the SHTF, she was still blaming everyone but herself, still telling lies to herself. And (this from a member of the small-to-average dick size) all you women that just to have the big dicks, more power to you. I had very few complaints (until it got weak in my old age) about my small dick. So, just chase the big dicks, it does not hurt me but eventually it will hurt your average sized husbands/boyfriends and possibly you. All you Marthas deserve what comes.

FTDS I'll repeat; this story is way beneath your potential. It's a short cut; a cheesy short cut. It's like the big mystery that's finished with the car chase, fist fight and last minute confession. FTDS you write well; but this was about as creative as a postcard.

And no I find semen slurping, jizz swallowing cuckold's watching their wives get it on with some other man to be nauseating, but to go out and mutilate someone to get even is sick. this guy is a sociopath; his wife's lucky he hasn't dismembered her for forgetting to make the bed. Hey maybe that's what he should have done.

he never touched her, he left , she took her own life, he just destroyed those that touched what was his, and yes when you are married you belong to each other, sex's kills ask most aids victims in the 70's,80's.....they lived, they just wont fuck with another mans marriage. ps was too nice if you ask me, no sea salt was used.

I say this tale is no more over the top than a wimpy cuck sucking the cum of five guys out of his wife's pussy while they all laugh at him.

I'd rather read about a murderer getting revenge on cheaters than a cock sucking cuckold wimp husband. Fuck anyone who doesn't agree with me. Keep writing the good stuff FTDS. It balances out the cumlickers.

So the girls sided with the man they know to be a brutal murderer. I mean, she would share that tape with the cops, wouldn't she? And while I am no lawyer, I think it could be argued that the trust was funded with assets that had been misappropriated.

It is always amazing to me that these jokers manage to flee the country without being noticed. How the hell did he leave no trace when he headed for the Philippines? And his becoming a master at hiding his money trail was also quite amusing.

And another surprise, that nice couple likes to talk down about the guy they cuckhold rather than recruit him. And wifey plays along. They sure seemed to have changed between stories. But if you want to write about a good-hearted monster, 'created' by an evil wife, I guess you just have to ignore some basic facts.

I liked a couple of the early FTDS pieces so I have been reading them still. I think I need to learn from my mistakes and stop.

It's the same as all your stories, turning an unoteworthy husband into some kind of barbaric monster. I highly highly doubt this is how a man of faith would handle this situation. As a matter of fact he's even worse then she is after doing this. The author has me questioning his sanity right now.

Her conclusion that the neighbors were mutilated to prevent them from identifying their attackers was before she realized that her husband had been responsible for the deed. The real reason for cutting, burning or otherwise mutilating genitals, tongues and fingers was that he was removing all the parts of their bodies that had ever had sexual contact with her.

a fitting ending for the wife. Thanks.

....yarns again, turning an admittedly violent BTB/BTC into a quasi-political fairytale. What, are you, an Obummer speech writer? It's a rare gift to be able to create such a grandiose fairytale from what is already fiction. Time to get off your moralistic shit-wagon, there buddy. IT'S A STORY!!

Now, in fairness, I agree that it was extreme and distasteful.

But I also get that FTDS may have or may be having or may care about someone that may have or may be having a soul-sucking experience like Tom.

If so, he's likely using the story to give vent to his rage over the crappy treatment of the cuck and the crappier treatment they usually get in the courts.

I can relate. After my cousin got triple-raped by his fuck-around wife, her connected lover and the man-hating, godless, family fucking legal system, I took a lesson.

When 15 months after his demise, I found that my wife was cheating, I admit I contemplated some very creative retributions for both she and her lover, while planning and executing my exit strategy.

I didn't act on any of those darker thoughts, but got very creative in the theater of my mind for awhile.

The hardest part of the process was keeping her as 'in the dark' as she'd kept me 'till she got careless and arrogant. In my case, I didn't have to be so careful for so long. my 'retributions' ended up merely consisting of my 'scorched earth' exit strategy and their very public humiliation.

I did not file for divorce, get help from friends, or even contact anyone. Instead, I methodically bankrupted us and disappeared with a new identity and all the liquid assets from the fiscal demise I executed. Yup, I commited frauds and felonies without bodily harm. My intent was to get out with all the assets I could.

It took another two years in hiding to complete the building of my new personna and history, but here I am.

I have never remarried, nor have I had a serious relationship of any kind in the roughly 16 years since those events.

I prefer more...transient encounters. I no longer believe in feminine loyalty or honor, nor human decency.

I have had no contact of any kind with anyone from my former life and am changed enough it is unlikely that anyone from there/then would recognize me if we passed on the street....

So, understand that those of us that choose to be responsible for things, recognize that there are consequences for our acts, whatever they may be. We get to choose the act, but not the consequence that follows....that was hard-wired before we all got here....and unless you have experience, it is unknown to us in advance.

The courts, political systems and society seem bent on having choices but no consequences....and the family courts have done a pretty fair job of creating the illusion of it....for the women.

Then some asshole like me comes along and fucks 'em all up, frustrates the system and gets out.

Did I win? Hell no! Are you mental?

I haven't been more than moderately happy in 18 years, man! Get real! Re-read above!

But, I'm free and didn't let them fuck me....and am as happy as can be expected for being one of the infinitely disenfranchised.

If he'd "challenged them," the best that could have happened, she'd have stopped and then he'd still be stuck with a cheating slut for a wife who he'd never be able to trust. The worst, he'd divorce her and lost half or more of everything to her, including two years with his daughters. So minimize the impact on the kids until they're old enough to know the truth and condemn their cheating mother, then take everything that's left.

Ok, the blooding of the other cheaters was over the top, but it doesn't sound as if any innocent people were terribly upset over it...

Our 'hero' coldly takes a knife to two people but isn't up to challenging them, or his wife, in the previous two years?

Now thats a BTB fir sure, need more to counteract the turd tamping cupcakes that post in LW.

What a great guy for the BTB crowd. Unfortunately some of the more rabid "real men" out there will love the ending. There should be a category for sick.

This was too far over the top. I think you've been watching too many slasher films. Infidelity is not a victimless act; who was the victim here? It certainly wasn't the murderous man. Could it have been the adulterous wife? Not likely. The victims here were the two mutilated neighbors. All they'd done was include a faithless wife in their wanton sex.

Are we supposed to have any empathy for anyone here? I empathized with the two neighbors; certainly not the wife and absolutely not the betrayed husband. I can't imagine the suffering the unfaithful wife might have sustained living with a brute like that for two decades.

In short there is absolutely nothing redeeming in this horrid tale. Are we supposed to praise Charles Manson? Yeah; let's praise all serial killers everywhere. You go Leather Face! Hooray for Osama Bin Laden! Three cheers for anyone who is a mindless murderer.

FTDS you're better than this. Now pull this trash off the site.

Thank you FTDS for another ending. I'm sure the BTB crowd are overjoyed, and yes I agree with some of the justice handed out. This just went over board.

No the disturbing part is some of the anon commits, especially the individual who said "this is erotica at its finest". In case you missed it there was NO sex or romance in this story. Just violence if that is your idea of erotica....please seek help!.........sorry, I'll not commit farther. I just won't sleep quite as soundly tonight. (some of the individual on this site scare the shit out of me)

I guess people have never heard of, crime of passion. Where spouses kill or hurt their significant other. If the wife was faithful, she would be alive. It's only a story folks, get over it.

BTB

*****STARS

How in the hell did this EVIL SHIT get past moderation????

and book this sick fuck in. Does anyone really believe this shit deserves a place on an erotic literature site.

HE GAVE THEM WHAT THEY DESERVED AND FUCK THE ANONDIOT CUCKIES WHO CLAIM OTHERWISE!!!! THEY ARE JUST LITTLE DICKED CUCKS WHO THINK THAT ALL MEN SHOULD BE CUCKS LIKE THEM SO FUCK THEM UP THE ASS WITH A FUCKING FIRE POKER AND STEAL THEN FUCK THEIR WIVES AND MAKE THE CUCKIE BASTARDS WATCH!!! THEN CASTRATE THE LITTLE WANKERS AND CUT THEIR HEADS OFF ISIS STYLE!!!!!!!!!!! THE LITTLE PUDS DESERVE IT AND WE NEED TO BREED THE CUCKIE GENE OUT OF THE HUMAN RACE!!!!!!!!!

I love good guy wins, bad guys lose. A little brutal with a " Take No Prisoners" attitude. FTDS takes the original story to the next level with a fantasy of vengence run amok. Thanks. 5

So "wow' anon - wake up and get a life. This author is one of the best at bringing closure to the up-teem bullshit, cuck shit stories on this site. Although, if the moderators on this fuck up site had any brains - they been told how to fix this type of cuck fucked up stories, yet they do nothing. Seriously, the moderators [especially the female moderators] are as illiterate as some of the idiot want-to-be authors on this site.

This one comment sums up everything I've ever suspected about the BTB crowd. The only thing missing is the racism:

"by Anonymous

09/30/14

A 5 star Great ending. Too bad its not legal t kill cheating spouses and the ones that cheat with them, and make them suffer in the process. After all some people just deserve killin'"

Thank you, Annony, for being honest. I hope the rest of you understand the type of person you are aligning with.

As brutal as it was, it was a good read. It seems that the things wifey and her buddies said is what probably turned the daughters against their mother. I have never understood how a man could put up with that for literally years (for the presumed sake of his kids) without going nuts. It seems you think he can't.

So she broke her vows , does that justify his extreme behavior. He could have confronted her . But to do an isis type of revenge is over the top. It's sad for those who like this story. All because of sex , he could have divorced her. But cutting and disfiguring two people because she fucked them . That is to much . This is pure gore.

A BIG FIVE---A GREAT STORY___----___BTB

that was fairly nuclear.

I can't believe anyone writes this crap. Revenge is one thing, acting like a maniac is another. Three paragraphs into the story and I was done. You may think that you're some great writer, but this required no imagination, and is just plain revolting and stupid.

Thought you said that was not going to be "nuclear"? This is a lot worse!!!!

No drama, no excitement. Like hunting with a machine gun; too much disparity of power to make an interesting or exciting tale.

Well...I took it.

Well written. All you had was pain and torture. Obviously it has an audience from some of the comments.

While I thought your other tale of the man losing weight was over the top, at least it had story, character development, a few twists and turns.

Here we have burnt off nipples.

I don't mind atrocities in stories, but I need more than atrocities in stories or I might as well watch Saw.

And this is your solution, ending a story the author ended the way he wanted and then tacking on a truly disgusting ending? Maiming them for fucking his wife isn’t BTB, it’s psychotic.

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It’s also arrogance on your part. It’s one thing when the original writer starts something and then never returns. LaffWithMe purposely wrote “The End, only it wasn’t the way YOU wanted it to end. Ya know, I wasn’t that crazy about that end, either, but that’s what LaffWithMe wanted. But, no, it had to be about you and want YOU and only you wanted.

Over the top revenge is not entertaining. I usually like this author's endings, but not this time. I will say though that I still think he is one of the best on this site. You never know where he is going to go with a story.

There are authors who are good, but their stories are like paint by numbers. StangStar06, Xleglover,etc... are two of the ones that come to mind. Their stories all follow the same formula. You can tell how a StangStar06 story is going to end when you are 1/4 of the way through. Same with Xleglover. There is no anticipation because you already know what is going to happen. With this author, you can't put him in a box. I like that about him, even if there are some endings that I could do without

To give 5***** for a cruel revenge story I have that opinion the LW hub was divided into two hubs and this story was in the sexual majority husband hub this story owned 3*** from me. Yes some sad consequence stories are important to show some cheating spouses drives the other spouses to extrem, so sometime is VERY IMPORTANT TO SHOW THIS TO US readers. However the true revenge to be happier with a newer better mate or spouse and other redistribution things are the auxiliary only, but sometime the best as Longhorn07's gemstory "Fool Me Once".

look im not some guy who thinks what she did was right. but this was way over the top. plus, why would her daughters think this was okay. so their mom cheated, does that make what their dad did right. just divorce the slut and move on. in real life his daughters would side with their mom. thinking it wasnt to bad what she did and that their dad was a physcho.

...what prompted this author to "finish a story" that was written THIRTEEN YEARS AGO. Out of all the stories posted in the past 13 years, THIS one bothered him so much that he felt compelled to "finish it?"

How sad.

He did what he had to do...Terminate all the good things the couple thought were the best...Now they will be just a poor crippled married couple, with no way to satisfy themselves or anyone. The wife so needed of big cock, since that day never needed any more sex. She killed herself...But before she suffered nine years...What a happy and proud man he should be feeling...

with keyboards and computers, the mutilated parties could always identify their attacker- plus he left a tape showing he knew giving the police motive for him having committed the crime- despite my nitpicking, i still liked the story 5

...another four-star LW story involving a brutal mutilation and suicide. Just look at the repulsive felonies committed by the "hero" of this story, who several commenters are applauding:

-- assault with a deadly weapon

-- mutilation

-- torture

-- threats

-- theft

-- abandonment

This guy is a hero, right? And these same people who applaud this hero have the balls to lecture others about their "morality?" Wow.

only story that made sense on this day, the rest were written by people who died a long time ago.

You're damn right a lot of people like these here stories about death and genital mutilation! Why the hell you think there are so damn many of them? Why, if people liked those damn chuckholding stories, then there'd be a lot of them on this here site, too, now wouldn't there? But it ain't like that at all. Just a handful of sickos posting their sicko stories about extra-marital fun, swingin' and sharin'. That ain't what this category's about, dagnabbit!!

Believe me, if'n I were capable of gettin' an erection, them chuckhold stories wouldn't excite me one bit. But these here stories about suicide and dick-slicin', well, they'd get me harder than an ol' hickory stump!

It's a damn shame you're anonymous, 'cuz if'n you weren't, why I'd spend the rest of my afternoon goin' through every one of your stories and givin' them the ol' ONE STAR!! That makes me feel right powerful, it does. But instead, it's time for my nap. Hopefully I wake up from this one.

Signed,

Angry Old Man, LW Morality Police

I recently submitted a story that was eerily similar to this one: wife caught cheating, husband cuts off the cheater's clit and her lover's dick, and escapes to Belize with their daughter. A couple days later, I got a notification that my story was rejected. Reason?

"We generally do not accept submissions of nonconsensual sex in which the "victim" gets absolutely no sort of thrill or enjoyment from the acts, or is seriously and /or permanently physically harmed/abused."

Hmm...seems like the admins don't follow their own rules when it comes to certain authors. How about a little consistency, Laurel & Manu? Is anybody even in charge of this insane asylum?

You described the story before it started only you lied!

It was pathetic, i think you are a closet gay in denial of what you really like and that is big dickies! Don't you?

All that rough and tough stuff, where is that coming from? have you finished knitting me that onesy Yet?

Love you my big tuff guy!

PS Stop writing

Pretty funny the first couple of rants.Now? Not so much.Just cut and paint idiocy You made your point.You know the definition of insanity...keep doing the same thing and expecting a different result.Guess what Old Man looks to me like a lot of the readers here enjoy this.It does.not look like its going away.anytime soon and your rants are ...............

Typical shit from a psycho who likes to jerk off towards violence and murder, then set his hero up with some kind of little harem. As if any of those women actually like fucking his tiny little shriveled old cock, he's just a paycheck to them, just like the only women the author can probably get to fuck his sick ass.

Awesome , great job. Loved it.