All Comments on 'Marty's Quest Ch. 01'

That kept me wondering what comes next....5

oh yeah-you have to keep going on this story-so far so good-well done

I hope you will keep up the good work. I am looking forward to subsequent chapters.

Thanks for sharing.

Attached was an image, a picture of what Marty assumed was the woman who wrote the message, from the waist down. Her bare shoulders had the ends of her blonde hair brushing against them, her breast were small but full, with only a little age to them. Her arm was extended past her slender midsection and spreading her pussy, pink and inviting beneath a light, trimmed bush.

SHOULD BE:

Attached was an image, a picture of what Marty assumed was the woman who wrote the message, from the NECK down. Her bare […]