All Comments on 'Mary and her Lovers Ch. 01'

More please.

Another lucky husband who's wife understands his needs and is happy to please him. This is of course every married man's fantasy.

I enjoyed your story and understand that us cuckolds usually turn jealousy into a positive emotion. Can't wait for more.

The story is rife with mismatched time statements, such as when the SEVERAL phone calls took place. Pity, because with some self-editing, there IS an LW story there. Using the LIT volunteer editor option would probably help even more, by getting rid of misspellings like coxing - coaxing (or wrong homonyms, such as wave-waive).

In your bio you say your negative commenters do not share your Fetish/Fantasy. Why not post your stories in Fetish where even you believe they should be?. Your words not mine.Odd no? This Fetish/Fanatsy appeals to a very small group of people who read LW's. Listen what two adults want to do with the sex life is up to them but dont be surprised about the negative comments. I guess you can jsut keep deleting the negatives.

Fantastici story!!! THANKS!

Calclover; I wrote that (fantasy/fetish) in my profile because I'm pretty sure that's what it is; but my previous story posted in fetish, received a few comments saying it should be in 'loving wives'. So... that's where I'm at with that. Oh, and I don't delete just 'the bad' comments, just the one's posted by anonymous users who want to complain about the story, obviously without even reading it. Why waste their time, and mine. So, I just delete. I welcome criticism, as long as it's done politely, they give their name and read the story.

Lickideesplit ; I appreciate the constructive criticism and always welcome that. I was unaware of the volunteer editing option, I recently started using the site and do not yet know my way around. The time stamps may be a bit off as I'm typing from years back, and don't remember the little details, like the exact time, just that they happened and what was said. I'll work on making them better.

Blanket thanks to all else that commented! I submitted several at the same time, but they have yet to be approved... so more is on the way, I'm at chapter eight now. There are a lot of typos, but I type it out in a app designed for writing, then cut and paste into Literotica... but, I swear it changes. Because I usually I triple check before submitting and the app will pick up the grammar mistakes (and even missuse of word choice, and meaning.. i.e. wave/waive)

I enjoyed this story and look forward to others as hot.

I wish this was a story from my wife.

Congrats!

my wife M and I married 25 loving years

I love my wife dearly she is also love me very dearly.

few years before I started fantasizing my wife have sex with otherman

now the fantasy is very strong. I never tell my wife that fantasy

how I approuch my wife and describe my fantasy please advise

I waiting for your suggastions.

Congrats! ;)

Who is Chris that Mary mentioned in the phone conversation with Dear? I thought the 9" cock belonged to Jason from the office. Dear appears to be a lovable cuckold and cannot wait to hear Mary's description of her next fucker. Bet he's black. 4 stars. The future doesn't bode well with no sex for Dear after she comes home. What is cucky Dear's name?