All Comments on 'Mary Ann's Valentine'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Excellent and romantic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wonderful!

Wow- this was beautifully written, sensitive and very erotic. Oh, my! Gilligan! He may be clumsy in other ways but as a lover he's thoughtful, considerate, polite and very sexy indeed.

I loved the Valentine he made, with all the careful trips back and forth to collect the red soil and the flowers, even taking his precious hat off to put the flowers in. And when a despondent Mary Ann saw his Valentine and the effort he had put into making it, she was overjoyed- as any woman would be! All these other details made the whole story an entertaining, well-rounded pleasure to read. I hope you have other MA/G stories lined up, as I love GI and especially these two. Best wishes, from Julie

dcltrueleftdcltrueleftabout 13 years ago

Good character choice! I once read an interview with Tina Louise, in which she related Dawn Wells often recieved more male fan letters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Mary Ann is hot!!

This was really good. I used to watch Gilligan's Island and lust after Mary Ann. I wish I could have been Gilligan in this story

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 13 years ago
Awesome

A blast from the past really. I rarely watched Gilligan's Island but enjoyed it when I did. Great job and good luck in the contest.

EesomeBeastieEesomeBeastieabout 13 years ago

Mary Ann just seemed a bit of a cliched character in this. Was she like that in the original too?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I've just read this for must be the tenth time already. It's so beautifully written and I love the characters of Mary Ann and Gilligan. He was always very thoughtful in the tv series and although we never would have seen anything like this on the show, I'd like to think their relationship would be as sweet and exploratory as this and that they would take their time to make each other happy. I like how you don't have them just banging away like rabbits, lol xx

OldManFromIowaOldManFromIowaabout 12 years ago
IF IT WAS REAL

If this was a real story about real castaways on a real deserted island, a real Mary Ann, a real Ginger and a real Lovey would all be pregnant with their THIRD child each, after three years. That is of course, unless any of those three women arrived with implanted birth control in which case they would be waiting until the implants wore off before becoming knocked up. I would expect someone like Mary Ann to attempt monogamy and Lovey is married (Still likely not a problem for her) which leaves Ginger with a(N official) choice of four men to screw. The story itself is very nice, however. It does need a sequel, preferably one about Mary Ann's cherry popping experience! Keep it up, this is pretty good stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Great story!

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