by maskedstranger
You did a great job for a first time. Nice tempo and descriptions. Keep up the good work, you have a lot of talent. I look forward to reading more.
and HOT! The anonymous fuck is always a delight, and your description was right on.
The theme is erotic, and loved the story... caught up in the moment
Loved your story, told us as much as necessary about all the characters, their motivations and who cares about their family history? Got directly to the point and I hope you'll write a lot more!