by massageaddict
I would love to have a fantastic massage like that. Chinese are fantastic at massages and hand jobs.
A story written, as are many others, for the strokers and I’m sure you’ve caught your intended market. You said you wrote it to take a break from your longer series and I’m sure you enjoyed doing it. Sometimes you do need to give your brain a different direction for a few minutes.
There are, as all writers know, many differences between English English and American English and the majority of them are totally unimportant. But I have one pet hate and I grind my teeth and fire comes out of my nostrils when I see it. It doesn’t apply to all American writers but it does only apply to American writers and it’s one word contained in the following paragraph I’ve c/p’d from your story.
“She completely cleaned my dick and balls and then pushed her husband off of her, grabbed me by the hand and drug me to the master bathroom for a shower. It was strictly for cleaning with an occasional kiss or two, but within five minutes we were toweling off and Joe had brought my clothes to me to get dressed.”
She did not “drug him to the master bedroom.” She dragged him to the master bedroom. A drug is a noun applied to a pharmaceutical product not a verb applied to moving an object/person from one place to another. It’s nothing personal to you but, as I’ve said, it makes my blood boil particularly when I see it, as here, in a perfectly good story. Rant over. It hasn’t made any difference to how I’ve marked the story.
In the midst of reading the story, my uncut cock began to grow until it got rock-hard pushing my red swollen spongy mushroom cock head beyond my foreskin. When I got to the end of the story, my aching cock powerfully spurted ropes of thick hot milky-white semen all over my chest & tummy with first few squirts hitting my forehead, lips, and chin! I then rubbed the warm sticky, slimy cum all over my body to intensify the cum’s bleach odor. What a great relief!
Truly enjoyed this story...have wished for something like this for years.. wife won't have any part of it...I keep hoping and remind her what fun she's missing
I send her a picture of three one hundred dollar bills.
Her response?
"Be there in 45 minutes, should I bring Joe?"
Part two: Reply, only if i can fuck him two.....