All Comments on 'Massage Therapy Ch. 03'

This a very exciting story. Please continue hope with some humor about sniffing thier pussies after they excercise.

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm feeling a little weird-ed out. Yesterday I read Chapters 1&2 but was disappointed that there had not been an update since '08. I just figured it would end up another unfinished story that can be found all over Lit.

I had left my Laptop on the Members screen, seeing that you have started posting again and did a refresh. How pleasantly surprised I was to find another chapter.

I went back an read your Bio, looks like your back.... Welcome.. I like your stories, have added you to my Favorites. Looking forward to more chapters and now I'm jumping back to read your other Updates/Stories. Keep'm coming

no where as good as the first two. did you even reread them before writing this? adding the mom ruined the feel of the story it should have been just the kids.

Loved the sex and the intimacy between all the family. That is love. Was the six years to let sisters baby time to grow up and attend school? Just a question, now you have time to write again. I do love it and can't wait for the next chapter.

Stupid story. Not one part is the slightest bit believable.

i love it please dont wait so long to do more

An absolute gem.

It is certainly one of the best I have read on this site. It was so engrossing that I read all the three together, punctuating it with five orgasms of my own.

In the next part I request you to dwell on Richard sucking Kristin's toes and also Janice's, which I am sure would be as beautiful as rest of their bodies.

Eagerly looking forward for Janice's classes for Kristin.

Keep up the good work.

Thanks

There just has to be more to this highly erotic and sensual story...next chapter please!!!

I hope you are not going to lolligag around writing the next chapter .I had to say lolligag an old boss of mine always used the term it amused me.Anyway great job keep on trucking.

That was a fantastic story! Thank you for sharing it with us! Keep up the great writing

I remember reading this story some time ago and there was a first chapter called Massage Therapy which started off with Kristen coming home hurting, trying self massage for relief, then falling asleep topless on her bed. Her brother is on the way home from college to surprise his mom and sister and knows vaguely that something "big" has changed for his sister. He gets home, calls out for his sister, no answer, goes right to his room to strip for a shower, grabbing two towels on the way. As he walks to the shower he passes by his sister's room with the door mounted so he could look in going back the other way. He sees Kristen sleeping on her bed topless and stares in amazement at her new fast growing breasts. Sis wakes up sees brother, exclaims how wild it was that her new development occurred over the summer so quickly and how they hurt from growing pains. Brother drops extra towel, 1st is around his waist, walks in, asks sis if he can get something or do something to help. Sis, totally trusting, asks for a boob massage. This kickstarts the before events that led to the festivities described at the beginning of Ch. 2. Where did that chapter go? As of 4:10am EDT US 08/01/2014, It is not in the index location where it used to be in the Incest/Taboo section

Hope there's more to cum with this story.

Well written, the story flowed very well. Very few typos. I would like to read more about these three. Thank you for the story

wwoow that was hard

I would like to agree with another comment, would love a follow up and see what happens with the son and daughter and mom. did they get the pill on time, did they try anal and when he graduates do they move off and the daughter goes to college and they act like a married couple? so many twists and turns that could be used.....

we must be able to follow this lovely trio as they love each other

Lovely story, and the added realism is a very nice touch.

It happens just like this in countless families, and it's as beautiful as love and lust can possibly be. Built-in friends and lovers, with healthy, life-affirming relationships that progress naturally from agape love to the love of eros, transcending the usual bounds between husbands and wives and creating something even better and certainly deeper. Heaven on earth.

Some stylistic and grammatical glitches. But en balance, well done. You show real potential. This was gorgeous and highly erotic.

The birth control stuff was, however, unnecessary, disruptive and jarring. You could easily write around this (I have done so many times in my own original stories) and re-submit an improved version. And I've sometimes done this myself, creating my own strictly private versions of others' work with the needed improvements, thus creating a better reading experience for my eyes only.

Here's how: just make Mommy a few years older, say 45 or so, and pregnancy is no longer an issue. And have Richard climax on his sexy sister's big tits or cum inside of her only when she's menstruating, and that solves said problem with her, too. Easy.

But otherwise, top marks, I gave you five stars. Keep up the good work.

I'd add that you need go no further with this trio.

Their story is done. Tell another.

Too many stories here drive things into the ditch by adding endless new (and progressively worse) chapters and scenarios with different characters until the story is hopelessly harmed and veers into the soap operatic. Leave Ricky, Kristen and Janice where they are. We can assume they remain in a state of sexual bliss for long years.

Try a new story with completely different characters. Here's an idea seldom seen here: how 'bout a story concerning siblings who get to-gether for the first time in their late 40's? That would be interesting.

Good series. Would have loved it to conclude with how long the relationships continued, and if either female chose to have a baby from it.

I'm at odds with myself. I agree that this is a great chapter to end on, but I'd also enjoy further lessons from Janice. Anal play (rim jobs, finger and penis penetration), toys and anything else your mind can imagine. Your writing is exceptional, well paced and exciting. I'm not concerned with diminishing quality because your execution is almost perfect. Keep it up.

this story next needs someone to find out about this family sex trio. like moms busty co-worker or kristy's girlfriend

Love to see an additional chapter with Mom and daughter PG

Please continue with. This story add another chapter 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

.....and I am emotionally exhausted. Right now I don't care about the future I just want to read about how Janice is going to coach Kristen on how to give a blow job. Let the future be several chapters away!!!!

Mom better get the morning after pill right away, and get them both on some sort of birth control that will start working immediately, like IUDs. Especially if he is going to continue fucking them bareback. Nothing could ruin this perfect situation like a baby or two growing inside either of them.

They are going to be so happy together. Maybe Kristin can go to college with her brother.

The "This was awesome!" comment was mine.

which includes a very controlled diet and exercize regimine, she will probably remain fertile for another ten years. So, let the massages continue and the family expand, with both mother and daughter experiencing multiple pregnantcies.

I've read all three of these chapters today, I've cummed once for each of them. I am in a complete and utterly satisfied state of exhaustion.

What a hot sexy story. I have just read it for the second time and it is still one of the best.

I stroked my cock so much it's tender now. But I have a huge pool of cum in front of me. YOU really do well writing this and I bet you jerked off while writing it. A suggestion. Write another chapter about the day after pill and birth control. Little sister needs to learn about riding his cock and doggie. Mom needs to be filled everyday and I'm sure big brother will be happy to help keep their pussy ad mouth full of his cum!

You have a wonderful way of telling your story. Really like the way you write. Please, can we have more of your of your tales. I am so happy to have found your work. Keep it up,HaHa

This story gets better with each chapter. I sure am glad this is ending with a cliffhanger. Can't wait for Chapter 4.

The word you're looking for is WANTON. The way you've spelled makes it seem like the mother is fucking with a pussy full of Chinese food....lol.

Another story where the females are big breasted, beautiful willing types, and the male is a blessed, toned and endowed sexual demi god. Very uninteresting.

Story, ATW! This is my first time reading this series! It's great. I'm headed

over to read the next chapter, just wanted to say Thanks!

Smoking - 5*!

THE WHORE MOTHER HAD TO JOIN THEM AND FUCK UP THE STORY

Just freaking hot!

Totally erotic. Ready for more.