All Comments on 'Master & Commander Ch. 01'

I would very much like to see more of this story.

Great premise!

Constructive criticism - make sure to double check your writing, as there are several grammatical and spelling errors. Possibly use an editor to read it through and check it with fresh eyes. Such a great story to be marred by seemingly insignificant (but to a writer's eye, glaring) errors.

Keep it up, I'm sure we'd all like to read more!

really enjoed it.....cant wait to see more

yeah i like to know what will happen to the daughter. i think its disgusting that gay relationship between the king and his steward. jeez...

Very nice. Looking forward to see more of Lady Alexandria...

I cant wait to read more.

This story needs to be continued!!!

i like the fact that he enjoys men as well as women...very hot