All Comments on 'Masterful Surprises'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
A fine story

Thank you for posting it for us - I really enjoyed reading it. I hope there will be further chapters - you have left it quite open for them - how about I give you five stars as encouragement?

MsQuoteMsQuoteover 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks mel_pomene. I got quite a few requests for a follow up to "A Masterful Seduction by the Book." I'm open to suggestions of what could happen with this couple for future stories. Sometimes I do a better job with ideas and inspirations that aren't my own.

enjoy_readingenjoy_readingover 11 years ago

You are wicked and devious. Had me hanging on every word you wrote. You didn't tell us what Patricia's punishment was, or did you? ... leaving her hanging and unfulfilled ... Love It !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

i loved it but it seemed a bit anticlimactic at the end.

MsQuoteMsQuoteover 11 years agoAuthor
enjoy_reading

I'm leaving her punishment for another story. ;-)

FlamingInnocenceFlamingInnocenceover 11 years ago
Longing

I am literally longing for the next chapter!

heathrowinneoheathrowinneoover 11 years ago
and where is the follow-on?

oh so well done and well written. enjoyed the piece and hoping there is a follow-on chapter soon! just enough suspense to have you aching for more! heath

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