All Comments on 'Master's Playroom'

I really liked this story! I couldn't vote an honest 5 due to the grammatical errors. Apart from that, I will definitely be looking for more stories by this author!

Did the previous poster see the submissive POV as grammatical errors? Those weren't mistakes by the author, it was being true to form! I really loved this story, and look forward to seeing many more.

I think this is one of the better types of stories for this category. Not particularly erotic, but plays right with emotion, while not particularly sadistic or egregiously hedonistic. But God, "little one" is sooooo overused for this formula type. I'd say it's better than slut, bitch, and cunt, but....maybe that's why such terms are so often used. Maybe "pet" as a pronoun might work nicely. I mean, like, I've been called the same name my whole damn life so that might work.

Anyway, this is sort of like fetish erotic romantic encounter, hardly a derisive categorization, though. Is there a next chapter, because there are some undelivered promises made at the start. Sorry, I probably shouldn't comment with a phone having airplane mode off while rolling down the runway, if I can't be bothered. The pilot's headphones are going to buzz with all my interference.