All Comments on 'Matt's Vacation Revelation'

keep this story going. it's one of the best!

This soo fantastic, it's almost beyond words. Thank soo much for writing it. The perfact life and the perfact coupling, and the perfact story.

There may have been a minimal amount of spelling or grammar errors but if so it's so nice to read such a well written original story plot that I was not distracted at all.

Well writen and fast moving, a good solid story line and well defined characters.The plus is the good ending. Thanks........Rich

One of the best, keep this story going it has so much potential and plenty of scope. Looking forward to lots more from Donna and Nicole.

That was a great story that you wrote about the family and how Matt was able to turn the tables on his lying, cheating father and help his mother out. It would be nice to see another chapter about how his mother and sister change after these events.

This was such an awesome and very hot story with the best ending. You did a great job.

This story is great & I look forward to reading more stories like this from you.

You just had to bring the asshole dad back into it. I usually give good reviews, but I just can't bring myself to it this time. The sex was good but Jeez WTF?

Oh well, I glues there is a place in Lit for degenerate psychos !

All of 1* !!

Went from a 4 to a 1 in a few paragraphs. Rape is a downer, plot device or not. Too bad, was enjoying the story.

"The bigger they are, the harder they fall". Sweet. More, please.