All Comments on 'Matty Meets Kimmy Ch. 03'

by smithE101

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caseykeller2001caseykeller2001over 11 years ago

Dude that was an awesome chapter, and there is nothin wrong with trying something new. I like that you threw some suspense in there, it just keeps it more interesting. Keep up the good work, bring on chapter 4 pls sir.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow!

This story is so realistic as compaed to y own experience in the 70's. Anal was not as big a deal, but the rest of the story desribes so many of our rleationships back then. more!

smithE101smithE101over 11 years agoAuthor
thanks

thanks for the comments.

You'll be glad to know i'm halfway through ch.4.

Just need to come up with some ideas.

:)

JorannJorannalmost 10 years ago

Overall I like the story. The breakup part seemed a little forced and was definately brief.

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