by smithE101
Dude that was an awesome chapter, and there is nothin wrong with trying something new. I like that you threw some suspense in there, it just keeps it more interesting. Keep up the good work, bring on chapter 4 pls sir.
This story is so realistic as compaed to y own experience in the 70's. Anal was not as big a deal, but the rest of the story desribes so many of our rleationships back then. more!
thanks for the comments.
You'll be glad to know i'm halfway through ch.4.
Just need to come up with some ideas.
:)
Overall I like the story. The breakup part seemed a little forced and was definately brief.