by espeteroh
You've written a very interesting love story with a fine twist from the normal. Congratulations.
i didn't understand why she refused the oral, but people are peculiar.
they did have a son together later, eh? nice. but neither found a permanent woman mate?
I really enjoyed this story. I have always wondered what it would be like having heterosex with a lesbian. Thanks for a nice tale.
Well told, except for some typos. One comment made was that something like this wouldn't happen. It has happened and much like this story. I know because I was the guy.
It's nice to see a story of yours with more build up than usual. As I appreciate stories (and not just erotic), it gets me real hopeful for the series you have written.