All Comments on 'Maxie Reckless and the Kith #03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Interesting...

That ending explains why Maxie only had a dad while growing up...

Very good story. I love new worlds being opened up to the reader like this... so many possibilties and new lands to discover. Not all of us can be those fabled adventurers that foray into oft dangerous, uncharted territory, so reading about them is the next best thing.

I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
omg, seriously beyond par of anything i've read on this site

written in a txt doc when i'd read nearly only read the start:

she survived the interrogation!

she was certainly very aggressive...

but now...

she would gangbang...

the Faoikith!!!

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But now my brain is so beyond the Princess Bride reference. Omg this was so awesome! I'd say worth it, but your 'world building' skills, separate from the lascivious joy I just took from this, are so fantastical that I can only think of a single author in comparison.

Fuck comparing. This stands alone. I'll watch your updates forever.

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