All Comments on 'May/December Romance Ch. 01'

A great read and easily a five.

Nathan

loved the story .. huge turn on

Such detail and sensuality.....very nice

Great imagery and very well written! A pleasure to read

Really thoughtful, well-written, definitely high on the list.

I didn't manage to finish this story. You spend too much time expanding on innate details and this breaks the development of characters IMO.

talk about dragged out.? i wont bother reading any more .?sorry

The high scores from readers speak for themselves. The slow development is perfect in my opinion and heightens the excitement of the situation. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series. Five stars is scarcely enough...

Thank you for this story. Your honest and realistic (educational even) treatment of such a "taboo" subject is outstanding. Your character development in this opening chapter is really excellent, IMHO. Even Greg (whom we haven't even met yet) already feels like a real person to me... not just a cardboard-cutout used to move the plot along. Top job, in my opinion.

Good story but needs editing in my opinion. Too much interjection and blocks of meaningless text. Don't tell, show. Good luck with your future writing!

So many stories on this site seem to slip into the ‘unrealistic’ and of reality… and that’s fine for some. I for one find this read a well written almost autobiographical recount of a real life experience. Keep up the good work.

IAaah, yeaaaa, like that. I was perving on your story. You were both naked for the duration of Karens stay.

Aaah, yeaaaa, like that. That is a beautiful sound. For a moment Karen sounded very needy, and how would you fit her into your life.

I plan on finding out