All Comments on 'McKayla's Miracle Revisited'

loved the continuation of this lovely story

Please continue this 'fan-f*-tastic' story. Can't wait to read more

That was lovely and emotional (drying eyes).

Thank you so much for picking up this story again. I can't wait to see what happens. Please don't keep us waiting to long.

A wonderful touching story - I (and others) are glad you came back to it.

You have been away far too long. You are the best story teller out there and I am glad to see that you are back in business. Thank you for publishing again and thank you even more for picking up this particular story. This story, along with the twin writings about Kevin and Melanie are the best and I am thrilled to see them not only continuing, but appearing to merge.

Brava old friend, please come back soon and often.

you are a superb story teller. I an so glad that the story of McKayla and Amberle has not ended and at least one more chapter will follow.

This story right from chapter one has been really interesting n heart felt! I was in tears when mckayla died...t felt so real....m Glad der r authors lyk u!

Thank you for this amazing addition, it made me cry all over again.

I like how Travis has matured, no longer an egotistical jock, as if there were any other kind. However, I am disappointed that the story ends here, there needs to be more, especially with that ending.

P.S. still hate how you killed McKayla and making this the only story I can remember that has made me cry. FUCK YOU BITCH!

I'm in tears again, and my stomach was flipping as I was reading Amberle's memories of McKayla. This story truly grabbed at my heart. ~ L

i just finished reading McKayla's Miracle for the 4x and everytime i would cry. and this one is omg you are amazing writer. :)

A true tear jerker. It was beautifully done. You are quit the talent.

Why do you always have to make me cry? This story is one of the best i' ve ever read!!!!!!!

you made me laugh, ache and cry with them.

Please make Amberle happy again - i keep wanting to walk over to her and tell her that everything will get better somehow in some way - please let her find someone that can ease her pain and give her back some happiness without taking the memory from her...i am sure McKayla would want her to find love again.

thank you so much for an achingly beautiful story.

love all the way from Germany

I, like probably countless others, hoped and requested that you finish this saga with a new life and love for her and maybe even their daughter.

Please do not leave us hanging.

This story has reached out, drawn me in, and had me feeling all the emotions that the charcters were feeling. It has been a long time sice a story was able to capture my attention like this one did. I experienced the highs, the lows, the ups and downs. The happiness and the sadness. I laughed and I cried. What a masterful piece of literature.....Thank you for contributing this work of art.

Thank you for this wonderful addition. Brilliant as always and please,don't leave us hanging!

I loved this story, I was laughing and crying. I like how you ended it, if it is the end. And maybe you can write a story that is not so sad, I would love that

I came back to re-read this story, and this'll be my 6th time or so. After finishing the 1st, when I scrolled down to click for the 2nd I noticed a 4th & saw "revisited" and was sooooooooooooooo (there aren't enough o's to describe the feeling) happy! I always loved Amberlee, and was happy to see a continuation. It wasn't what I'd expected (no new love; not even an almost new love), but I still loved it, nonetheless. Anyway, what I really want to say is- please give Amberlee someone new to love, she deserves it! Don't let her die alone! :( Okay, too dreary, but you get the picture. Thanks for this chapter; you're an amazing author!

This reminds me of when i lost my wife... She was killed in combat on september 13, 2011 we were celebrating our five month wedding anniversary and myself and our 4 wonderful kids miss her more than anything

Please give Amberle someone to help mend her broken heart!!!!!

The world of Amberle and McKayla is still the most poignant and heart rending story I have read on this site and yet the most beloved. I still think this should somehow find its way to the big screen. Thank you for finding a way to have this story take the next step. I look forward to the journey to repair and mend Amberle's heart.

I was intrigued by the characters from the beginning and that feeling never left me. You've touched on several issues that have bothered me for years, namely those who are quick to condemn a lifestyle, those who fail to take others as they are, children who are fortunate enough to grow up in a loving household, regardless of ethnicity/gender(s)/income and the like, not to mention those who refuse to do what is best for the common good.

I hope you'll revisit this story at a later time with an update.

Thank you again for sharing your talent with us. -- Best wishes.

Didnt know how you could finish the previous episodes that were full of romance & passion but you did it,looking forward to more about Amberle

I am a 63 Year old man. This series was one of the best I have read on Literotica. You brought a tear to my eye. Thank you so much.

I can't imagine finding any better story than this one. I am so looking forward to the follow-up series. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

I've read many stories on this site and I have to say that thise one is far and above the best I've read so far. Thank you so very much for sharing!

it a good love story

this was a wonderful story! i couldn't finish it last night so i went to bed ended up dreaming the story (some parts were exceptionally erotic) and after i woke up i immediately started to read again. not the ending i thought but it was better than i imagined.

thank you for the wonderful story

Really very little to add to that. This series is pure gorgeousness. I'm not sleeping tonight, hell no. Thank you for sharing this.

This is hands down THE best story on this site. Where most stories aim more towards sex(for obvious reasons) This particular story was so much more about being human and reading before our eyes a beautiful relationship blossom and grow (At least in my eyes) and the rollar coaster life is and sometimes can be. Yes this story made me cry im not ashamed to admit it in the least, This story pulled at my heart more then anything has in quite some time, And makes me wish im lucky enough to find my Mckayla some day.

You have not only created a world for your characters within the frame of their story, but you have created a whole world of characters that you have seamlessly connected together (Alan and Marissa, Kevin and Melanie). The impact the addition of these characters have on your story telling is subtle, yet significant. You have a talent for creating intertwined story lines that I have yet to find equaled on this site.

As with your other works, Amberle and McKayla exist and are real to me. McKayla's take on religion is interesting to say the least.

As I have said in another post about your work, keep it up. You should be a published author. Who knows...perhaps you already are!

As I first began to read the story I thought of it only as another sex story(not why I read these love stories), but I had a little hope as I read on as the author ferociously described a love fealt story. I began to crack and grin with joy in minor details of the adorable love affair. As a guy, people find it strange for me to love reading romance, but I enjoy it emincly. Of course I, as any other right minded male or homosexual female, still get quite "joyful" at the love making scenes. But. This story stretched out to me in a more serious manner. I became entranced with the characters interactions. The author provided elusive description and a beautiful scenario of love. As I began to entangle myself with the later chapters and melancholfully sensed the demeanor of the ending, I bluntly ached. Reading of the Mom, wife, lover, sweetheart of a soul snooze in a endless slumber engulfed my eyes with water. I contemplated to myself how could this happen through a randomized story i fumbled upon in a night of lonesome. I then explored the ending excert above and was hypnotized by the auhors display of the speakers pure love and sorrow and pain and tears. I began blissfully crying. Tears literally glided down my face symptastizing(if this is a true word) the speakers utter pain. The author has done a remarkable job entrancing me with the story. Beautiful.

I salute to the writer of this story HLD,you are truly an amazing person.thank you so much for sharing your great writings with us.God bless (cinder)

You made me cry so damn hard, I can't even breath properly. This is the best story, but I won't even re-read it, unless I want to get myself crying in the future. I hate reading sad stories, and especially since the way you describe stuff is heart-wrenching. Great job.

I loved the story, it touched me on many levels and actually made me cry. For a guy to get that fully engaged in the story reflects some excellent writing! Thank you! Now on to Tapestry....

So now I've read Kev & Mel's stories; then McKayla's 1 - 4 back to back (it's now 5 AM) and see that the story continues. Screw Lifetime; this should be a Prime-Time Mini-Series.

I'm a single, never married, 52 y/o Straight, Ex-Marine. I believe in marriage; which is why I haven't (I do not do One-Night stands); you've yet again made me hope that someday I will possibly find my own Soul Mate.

Thx;

DKP

i honestly love how you connect your stories without making it too obvious :)

alan's and marissa's restaurant actually made me laugh ^^

keep up the great work!

I'll never read this again. My heart can't handle this kind of pain. Lol. It's one of those stories that reminds people that they should cherish what they have before it's gone. I'm single but I hope to find a woman that I can find true love with. I can't even imagine losing the love of my life. I don't know how I'd make it. I don't know how people who go through this type of situation manage to carry on. Such a phenomenal story.

I agree wholeheartedly with many of the comments others have left here. Your writing is amazing and I didn't stop wiping away tears the entire time I read this. I can't imagine what it must be like to lose the love of one's life. I also will never read this story again, as it stands now I will likely be a mess for days and as soon as my girlfriend wakes up I'll be dealing with questions of why I look like I've been crying. I've never had a story tear me up as bad as this one has.

And four more bravos to make up five stars. The whole McKayla saga provides a damned good lesson in how to write love/sex stories with the emphasis on the 'love' which is surely essential to make the sex better. Just great!

I have just re-read your story and I loved it from beginning to end. I luxuriated in all the little descriptions (including the ice cream!) that made the story come alive. All the characters felt true and genuine.

With all good writing you managed to make me laugh out loud as well as cry and I was upset when I came to the end. Now I see that there is a new part and I am really looking forward to continuing the story.

Please don't stop writing, you have a fine talent for story telling

:S

Simply loved reading your series, follows the song, "The Greatest Thing".......

The only thing is , if you lose that great love, your heart will never be the same.

Alix

JUST WOW WHAT A STORY

RON TEXAS

While many of the stories revolve around sex, sex, sex...I really like how yours revolve around relationships! You allow your readers to get into the people instead of just sex!

EVERY TIME I READ THIS SERIES OF STORIES IT TOUCHES MY HEART. YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER EVERY STORY DOES NOT HAVE TO BE FILLED WITH SEX YOU OVER COME THAT WITH FILLING YOUR STORIES WITH FEELING AND TRUE LOVE. {McKayla's Miracle and Impersating Brianna series.

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

This story is brilliant, made me cry a lot as it brought back wonderful memories of my wife who i lost 3 years ago to Stomach Cancer

i cried to many times to even say, this was truly a beautiful story everything was in its place, i can only hope that someone out there had their life play out like this because although it was not perfect it had so much meaning.

Kat

It's the 1st time I cry after reading a story on this site. Very beautiful story and well done. Thank you!

Yes I just reading it again and I cried. Such a good story.

Ron

Each Time I read About McKayla start to cry. I know it is foolish of me to do so but the story is so heart warming and just ozzes true love between Amberle and McKayla that it just happens.I have read your other stories and you tie every thing together so good. Like the first time Melanie meets McKayla in (I want to be in love)

Enough. This story was different it centered on Maureen McKayla was there in bits and pieces enough to make me think back to McKayla's Miracle and all the love and giving in that story.(***McKayla's Miracle is still my favorite).

Ron Texas cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

The smile never left my face.

Jason

you have left this reader lusting after more though( I am a mere middle aged male you write with fun wisedom and love I so adore) bring it on please don't stop till you find a proper ending

I CRIED SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 BUT I LOVED IT SO MUCH LIKE NO LIE IT IS MY #1 FAVORITE STORY ON THIS SITE NOW AND WILL ALWAYS BE AHHHHHHH!!!!!!! IM JUST SO SAD THAT MCKAYLA DIED BUT HAPPY THAT AMBERLE AND MCKAYLA GOT TO SPEND SO MANY WONDERFUL YEARS AND RAISE A VERY SMART YOUNG WOMAN OHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS MASTERPIECE!!!!!!!!!!!! PS. sorry about all caps I was so happy when typing this!!!!!

I loved this series.

THE BEST

Great writer you made me feel like I knew them. Sad that McKayla died. Masterful writerbplease keep going.

A wonderful tale, so eloquently capturing the feelings of one widowed early in life.

The sadness at being left behind, coupled with the satisfied feelings of having met "the one" is extremely difficult to balance, and you managed it so perfectly.

The only difference I found was the religious part.

Over 30 years have past, and I STILL firmly believe that quite simply, there is no "God".

Having said that though, I hold nothing against those who chose to think differently:- Each to their own, as they say.

Our daughter was almost 3 when her Mum passed, and I am always grateful we had her.

A great tale, no matter how many times I read it, it always brings the same memories and tears.

Thank you for sharing it.

I am deeply moved by this tale. It cut deep and hurt but I wouldn't take back the time of reading it. Thank you.

Absolutely loved the entire series. The rewind, with its many flashbacks, helped keep the moving forward portion of the series in sync. It, too, can be a real tear jerker. Well done.

Nice little segue?

Thanks for the great story! I found the first Tapestry stuff but went back to this one first. Your stuff is great and I am a fan already.

This is probably one of the most heartfelt stories I have ever read on Lit. I.e. as in grabbing the most tissues while reading the story. The way you brought in the past with flashbacks was timely and let the reader feel more at home. Still letting one of the main characters die and using the death to further the plot, takes a heck of a gamble. But McKayla really did not die in the emotional sense. You kept her very much alive. The messages from the grave was one, Amberle constant remembering of her lost love, and the fact Maureen took after her Mom more than her Mommy, plus then the flashbacks all kept McKayla alive in our thoughts and on the pages. Still, everybody picked up and moved on, not forgetting the past. I know how Amberle feels about losing the love of her life, and it is hard, if not impossible to replace the person you had so emotional investment in with another. So her wanting to be alone works for me.

I even liked the religious aspect of the story. I grew up Catholic and disagree with the anti-gay rhetoric. McKayla’s take on her feelings hit home. The Church may be an anachronism, but it is still our Church.

This is a lovely story, and I don’t recommend reading without a box tissues close by.

In wish you well in your writing endeavors. Take Care

A beautifully set story where raw emotions are present, exposed and experienced. The messy aspects of life, love and spirituality work so effectively because it is raw and real. I’m blessed to have come across such a gift that you have created!