All Comments on 'Me, Her and Him'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Oh, the world is full of stupid idiot wimp writers

it s about your wife,hmm ?????

You never know how to expose her behaviour with her family and now you found the right way...write some stories about whorewifes...good for you wimp...let us know your home phone number and be sure to be away many days and nights and we will take care of that filthy cuntslut

ldlarry52ldlarry52about 17 years ago
Get a Sex Life Anonymous

Well, Anonymous, continues to trash fantasy stories. Why does he read them? For sure he is gutless in hiding behind anonymous. It's just fantasy. Can't Literotic do something about this dum shit??

As for this story, I enjoyed it. The story line probally comes closer to relife swinging then most other stories. I know from personal experience that couples who swing will cut the relationship off before it becomes too personal.

wildmanalsowildmanalsoabout 17 years ago
Yes

I agree with the previous post...about the idiot, needing to get a life, any life. I also agree this very closely resembles reality...sex is sex, marriage is marriage.........emotions do/will not work with more than 2 people involved................Sweet memories..........

ErotonautErotonautabout 17 years ago
Great - and realistic

The very first "reviewer" probably never read the story. The way the story never came out the way the narrator intended is way nearer the mark than most stories here.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 17 years ago
It could have been made into a good story

This story could perhaps demonstrate why not all true or realistic sounding accounts make for a good story. As I was reading the account of the encounters one after the other, I had the feeling that I fell upon the pages of a log. I started reading somewhere in the middle continued (still in the middle) and ended, still in the middle. It is not meant to be a derisive comment, just an illustration to the fact that not every log and diary entry make for a good story. We have here all the ingredients of a story: characters and conflicting motives. But somehow it all remains dormant. The involvement of the characters with each other as well as the conflict remains in the potential, and therefore there is no real resolution either, more of a symbolic cut off time (the day of “Me’s” birth day). *****

I’ll have to confess, what little enthusiasm I could ever master in my imagination for this kind of sexual arrangement, quickly disappeared along with those sad and awkward threesomes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A very sad story

What vapid and vacuous lives these three characters lead.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Cuck and whore hook up with a stunt dick.

26thNCuck26thNCuckover 2 years ago
5 Stars

Loved it. Beautiful Story

-26thNC Approved

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