by cowboy109
Loved it. Liked the concept and I'm sure you could continue..
Great story, yes there are grammar and spelling errors, but they are minor..
Terrible story. This is your fantasy, not at all realistic. Surgery on the first day? Pelvic exams alone the next day? Uh huh
TL;DR
This was the most boring crock of shit I have ever read on this site.
Give up on writing.