by demure101
Really can't think of much to say, other than I enjoyed reading it.
What a tender tale! I love their playfulness, as well! Am looking forward to chapter 2!
(I love the Old Irish spelling of her name...quite a nice touch, I think!)
A sweet romance story. Credible and well-described characters. I loved the part of the poem in French.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
I liked this story a lot. It’s always gratifying to see two people who seemingly don’t fit in find each other and realize that they just belong together. One thing though, the story made it seem like I could paint a portrait of some woman I am interested in, give her the “just been loved” look, and she’ll be mine forever after. Wow, what a concept. If I could only paint. Seriously though, it was a very good story. So thank you, demure101.