All Comments on 'Meet the Strokers'

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From your introduction, I was sort of expecting a mindless fap-piece. This was better than that. The conflict revolving around the daughter's vaginismus was believable. And the treatment (while a bit kinky and unorthodox) featured real elements and real information. Good on you. The dialog was good, and the atmosphere surrounding the sex was loving, compassionate and sweet, as well as hot and nasty. Thank you.

I think you should continue the story. We need to read about the whole family having fun together, and follow ups with Greg joining in. Swapping couples, FFM, MMF, this family has a lot of good sex for us to read about!

As someone whose early sexuality was helped along by numerous Beeline books (I probably still have a few lying around the house somewhere), I must say this was much better written. I still recall one author's name...Dick Gozinya. ;-)

I'd love to see this turned into a series. At some point, Chase has to bring home a girl from college to join the group and even up the odds. And maybe a flashback scene of Donna's first DP with Jack and her uncle, leading up to Shelby's first DP, or perhaps Donna being made "airtight" by Jack, Chase and Greg.

Enjoyed the story line. More pleas.

Find something online showing the format of a screenplay, (unless you already know), re-write this with a bit more comedy in mind, and you could sell it. Offer it for small cash & a percentage of gross sales. You'll do well, if you have a good attorney to look over contracts.

Please tell me that another part to this story is coming. It was really hot.

Your introduction was correct. I read the story simply to see if it hit any of my puttons. As an avid reader of incest stories, especially love stories between mother and son, this story did not but I saw how this type erotica as matured. Evertthing has to start somewhere.

DONNA AND HER FAMILY, CLASSIC TRAILER PARK TRASH