by deadeye_76
This is your fantasy from talking on line? Sounds good, hope you can make it real then write about it.
I enjoyed your story and the way you described making love to her.
this author, like many men on lit, have no knowledge of female anatomy. one inch, two inches, three, then hit the hymen. puhhleese! the hymen, in various configs is at the entrance to the vagina, not three inches in. do some research talk to women or knowledgeable guys. don´t write bs.