All Comments on 'Meeting in the Mall'

Great Story!! I'd love to see you take this futher!

Nothing beats a well constructed story and good use of the English language. Top marks!

I also wish you'd take any of your stories further than a single rushed sexual encounter tacked on the end.

Your use of the language is usually better than most, yet, it suffers this time from that bane of (you're - your) mixed up homophones. They're like turds on a salad plate - most unpleasant, but, there they are with all their unwelcome stench. If you were a typical trash contributor, I'd simply ignore all your stuff, but you can imagine a good story and your style is pretty good. Pull your socks up and keep improving. I know you're capable of better.

taking an older woman as a lover or wife and getting her pregnant......older women have so much experience and are willing to teach a young stud how to please her and take his time....go for it...you will never get better sex ever....

Very tender. Never mind the loser that thought he was your highschool english teacher. He's got issues not you. Keep'em comin.