All Comments on 'Megan & David Ch. 01'

It just made no sense at all.

nothing but a sick gay story and totaly unrealistic no real guy that was told to suck a cock or the guy would go find his sister and fuck her would suck it he would wait until it was out then grab it and twist then when the guy doubled over punch him out keep it out of the fantacy and twilight zone areas

I like it, it's the first story I've read in a long time that had an antagonist as real and evil as Aunt Bea. I hated her, but that conflict made the story seem as real as reality itself. A billion thumbs up!

I thought this was a really great story! And the beginning was a good distraction to the the ending. And every good story has to have a distraction of one sort or another, so enter Aunt Bea. I too, would like to run her over with a bus, but she definately had a place in this story. You did a great job! Keep up the good work!

Started off bad, with that queer stuff. Ending more than made up for it. Need more....

Good start. Very good description.

hot story but keep that lesbian bitch aunt off it

I really enjoyed your story.