All Comments on 'Megan's Secrets Revealed'

I loved the first story. This one takes it a notch higher.

I wanted to be the first commenter. *pout*

BUTT seriously, *grin* excellent work, Bel.

Squeezes,

~ Imp

I think the title says it all. Excellent sex scenes and a little bit of character development. I would've like to see him hold out longer but heck . . . he IS a guy. :p

I felt I was a fly on the wall, so masterful was your writing! Definitely the best story I've read in a long time!

In the first story, the characters were all painted as pretty good people. Okay, Kyle dumped Cathy, but that's what happens when dating: it often takes several relationships to find the right one. To his credit, he did the honest thing and ended that relationship before pursuing the other.

In this story, though, Kyle was right the first time when he accused the girls as scheming and manipulative. Instead of thinking with his little head, his answer to the question about Willy Wonka should have been that he wanted someone he could trust, so no, he didn't have everything he wanted. Megan comes across as even less appealing when she gets him to hurt her lover simply for her own enjoyment. Hopefully, when he thinks about it, Kyle will decide to stay with the girls just for the sex, but not delude himself into thinking she'd be a good life partner. He might also learn to keep from making open-ended promises, no matter how appealing the person asking them seems.

A real fine erotic story, but, as far as plot goes, you should have quit after first story. In this episode he is made to appear as a"fuck toy" that the girls manipulate to suit their own pleasure. Episode one had same real love in it, this is pure sex play. Nothing wrong with pure sex play, but it doesn;t have the emotional appeal of episode one. Nice writing though. the Ct Yankee

Well written, but I'll reiterate what other readers have said. In the first story the characters became real. Nothing wrong with a sex romp, if that's what you like, but your original story was a lot more fulfilling. In this sequel, Kyle was just a meat pony. I can certainly imagine him enjoying this as a threesome, but the idea that these girls set out to deceive him shouldn't sit well with him. He was in love with Megan and clearly wasn't with Kathy, but now he's fine with sticking around with a third part of a romantic triangle who only viewed him as a convenient beard or a self propelled dildo? If Kyle's character was shallower and less three dimencional this kind of porn logic would work, but having created such a rich palette, the characters, specifically Kyle and to a lesser degree Megan seem to being pulled in ways they shouldn't be going.

Still the first story was wonderful and the second, if it could be viewed in isolation, is quite well done.

please keep going with these characters. you've showed us different sides of them in these first two stories and i'd like to see how you bring it together

It was a very well written story and the character development was first rate, but things went downhill in the 2nd chapter. Cathy became a dom bi who will end up assfucking Kyle with her strapon while he does as he is told to Megan. The women did too much plotting and Kyle just has his head up his ass. I wonder how the story would have turned out if Kyle was able to think with his big head. Anon jerry

certianly erotic. Never the less, I'd have some real problems with the setup. My ex grilfriend had been cheating on me the entire time I had known her and I'm supposed to roll over? My current girlfriend is the one she was cheating with? She set me up? With the level of manipulation and cheating going on here how could he ever trust either of them? Enjoy the sex for this weekend but dump them both as soon as you get back to campus. Oh, by the way, drop the fraternity as well, they are for insecure little boys who can't stand on their own 2 feet in the real world.

I call BULL$H!T. The 1st part of the story was so well written! But this second part just begs belief!! (Yes I know this is fiction. But it started off soo good!) I'm a noble dude naturally protective of my feelings because they are a sign of weakness and can be used against me. And in this case were. And you cheat on me? Bad. With another girl? REAL bad! Only to find out our WHOLE relationship was a freakin' twisted Machiavellian LIE?! THE WORST! I was played. I am in full blown nuclear meltdown!!! The top has been popped on the rage machine. No dude would EVER trust them again! Let alone have sex with them! Too unbelievably quick, a matter of moments, to forgive! F'em! I'd leave their asses cold and make sure to burn their asses. I'd burn them to the ground. Scorched earth baby, scorched earth.

...lucky bastard.

I've had my trists with two lovely ladies at once a number of times but it never gets old reading about it or seeing it..

Fucking awesome! The delucious buildup and expectancy, knowing what you think is coming, you just shiver with excitement waiting for it! ...and her saying that she wanted it to hurt but definately wanted her to cum her brains out and enjoy it, it fires everything naughty off in your brain at the same time.

It was like wanting to fuck your girl in her ass and wanting it to hurt, to see the expressions on her face, to hear her discomfort and pain, hear her moan and wail while she crys, but doing it for you, letting you do it to her...not that you yourself are wanting/trying to hurt her, but knowing she loves you and trusts you and is willing to do this with you, for you, even with the pain. Its a whole different exotic type of emotion... Then watching the pain transition to uncomfortable, then to feeling good, then with some finger or tongue help feeling the explosion and a whole different set of nerves firing on all cylinders!

I especially loved how VERY REAL the entire scene was. Very realistic from proper lubrication (no bullshit spit, or any other nonsense), stretching a bit to prepare for it, easing things in. And was happily surprised to see someone mention having her push, like she is trying to go to the bathroom and push him out, best advice ever! Then more lubrication, because the stuff dries and nobody likes torn skin and trouble down there.

Awesome! Cant thank you enough for this story AND the guy got the entire dream, two girls that get along and they both do anal. Woo!

I was surprised that Kyle broke up with Cathy, discovered that Megan and Cathy were an item, and that Kyle got back together with Cathy (as part of a trio). A guy invests a lot into a relationship. When he breaks one off, it also takes a lot. So going back and mentally getting back into a relationship that he just broke off, in my mind, isn't going to happen. I also thought that if he discovered a cheating girlfriend, he'd end up breaking up with both of them (since both girls were essentially cheating on Kyle).

Yes, its a hot story and its written very well. My star rating will reflect this. But its difficult putting myself in this story's universe after thinking that I know how people would deal with the ending.

Nice story describing three people in pornea with each other. Pornea is the Greek word usually translated as lust but which more accurately describes using another person as a walking tool or object to satisfy your momentary sexual impulses of the moment. It is directly associated with sociopathic narcissistic personalities. Both females and particularly strongly show these personality traits.

They are in pornea and NOT love with each other. Valid love is based on valuing the other’s needs above your own. A sociopathic narcissist cannot do this because all others are merely tools. The sad thing is the male has fooled himself in believing that their pornea is valid love. He is merely a breathing penis to them. He satisfies their momentary lusts but as both women are demonstrable sex addicts he will eventually be replaced by someone with a bigger penis, more experience, or greater status.

Their future is sure and dismal. While they might go legal, there is absolutely no love based marriage possible.

Still good sex. 5 stars

I enjoyed the story and it was well written, my only issue is how easily he forgave the cheating, lying and deception. i get it he is a college dude and lets his dick do the thinking, But the character is written as being very self aware and introspective. So I think he should have been more pissed, hurt or something rather than letting himself roll over to their demands, a part three would be appropriate as unlikely as that is to happen