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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A REAL 'Loving Wives' Story

Thank you for this wonderful story. Not too many stories in this 'category' are what I would call 'Loving Wife' stories - usually some clap trap about cheating sluts and dickless men.

Look forward to your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
excellent LW story!

Thanks for a well thought out, believable story with more understanding that vengence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
poor

horrible grammar, punctuation, unbelievably trite dialogue... I think I will be skipping your stories in the future.

wetapapwetapapover 18 years ago
very nice read,

enjoyed it from beginning to end. keep up the good work. a fan always

charleybearcharleybearover 18 years ago
Fun Story

A heart warming story of what a healthy marriage should be. We often like to read the cheater stories because they bring out pretty intense emotions, but this story just reinforces the belief that there are great marriages out there.

Thanks for a great read.

Charleybear

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very interesting

This is a most interesting story. Very unusual, but quite entertaining. I wouldn't want a steady diet of stories like this, but it was uncommon enough to be enjoyable.

-- KVK

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
thank goodness for a happy one!

How wonderful to have a story about a happy, committed couple. There was the threat of cheating, which made the story engaging, but for once we weren't left with a couple of shattered lives.

I really enjoyed this!

Thanks--

ohio

gizzmo301gizzmo301over 18 years ago
Nice

that one caught me by supprise good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good story

glad to see happy ending.

PAPATOADPAPATOADover 18 years ago
Good Read

Thanks for an enjoyable story. I will look for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good Story

An original twist in this story. Thought it was excellent.

DavefoDavefoover 18 years ago
Excellent story

I think most of the men who read these stories hope their

wife would do the same thing she did. I know my wife would.

I would not believe it if someone told me she was cheating on

me. She has said the same thing, plus we are together 24/7.

One of the advantages of being retired together. It gets

better every day.

When you came out of a horrible marriage, you really appreciate a good woman...and she is.

Thanks again, I hope all our lady writers see it.

Nightowl22Nightowl22over 18 years ago
Great Story

I'm not sure who was the luckiest person in this marriage. The type of relationship I think everyone wants. Great romanticism and a neat little twist about the email and underwear. Everyone was young once and remembers those feelings, I'm sure.

Loved this story!

But I'm a romantic!

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 18 years ago
One of your best stories

Well done. Concise and clever.

NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
Very good!

A target to attain in a relationship!

THX

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very very nice....

nothing else to say... anyone who has read this far already knows...very nice

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 18 years ago
Wonderful!

I know I'm late reading your story but I have to tell you what a great stroy it is.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A truly pleasant story

Grey Eagle:

In fact it was so good a thought flashed through my mind as I reread the second page: The Thin Man, Nick Charles, was standing there mouthing Megan's words as everyone (including his beautiful wife, Nora) waited for his final pronouncement. After letting the suspence build he uttered the words that sealed the fate of his advesary, "The baby sitter did it." Sorry about that, but when I read a story that was this pleasant, this perfect, my mind sometimes takes strange turns. Thank You. Ronnie W.

louguy35louguy35about 18 years ago
I just read your story...

and I can't figure how I missed it until now. It was a truly refreshing and upbeat story that served to offset so much of the sadness that inevitably accompanies cheating stories, no matter how they end. Your story was also well written and constructed, and crisply told.

A particularly touching segment was the confrontation between Megan and the babysitter. Megan understood the tender longing that was just beginning to develop in the breast of the young girl, and she gently tried to guide her while at the same time chastizing her. If young women in real life had mothers as understanding as Megan was, there would be much less premarital promiscuity and many more problem-free, happy young women.

Well-told, Grey Eagle!

Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
great story!!!

BRAVO...

Imagine a intelligent Not insane wife that actually asks her hubby a fucking question

I mean usually she drugs him./... ties him up forces him to watch her fuck 19 men with 13 " cocks...

Isnt that usuually the way all these sick motherfuckers handle this stuff right?

anyway what a great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
out of the ordinary

original and i like the attitude of the wife. really something new.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great

Excellent read. Thanks for this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent Read

Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A little idealistic, but great!

Great story, keep up the good work.

bornagainbornagainalmost 17 years ago
Great Story & Well Written

That was a well written story and great editing work.

Pat

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
LOVING WIVES

This is one of the few stories that I've read that truly belongs in this category. I thought it was cute, romantic, and dramatic. Excellent portrayal of the wife's suspicious feelings as they increased through the story until the surprise ending. I kept expecting her to catch him. Just what I've come to expect from stories in this category. Thank you, a real treat.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great Story

I was just looking at old stories and found this one.I like

how you made the wifes character come out.Too many stories

in this site make the wife to be something like a moron.

bruce22bruce22about 15 years ago
Lot's of fun

and well written too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
nuts

Any self respecting wife would have gone for revenge with 17 blacks having 9-12 inch dicks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Grey

Grey, did you finally figure whether she is a setter or a sitter?

If she has only two legs and is not Irish, she must be a sitter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I just found this old story

But I'm still getting away with fucking Dave after all this time.

Margie's Mom

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Scorpio44 is correct.

That is cute. I rated it 5*****.

RonRWoodRonRWoodalmost 13 years ago
Nice

What most of the others said....different

huedogghuedoggover 12 years ago
wow ............

a woman that believes in her man. and to top it off she didn't just run out a fuck someone to get even. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Jeeze, I loved this story!

Probably the original male fantasy...

Mostera1Mostera1over 12 years ago
Superb

I love TLV stories!!!!!!

Thank you!

Mostera1Mostera1over 12 years ago
Well

I meant TLW, True Loving Wife, however; after reading this over again, Megan is a TLV, a True Loving Vixen!

Thank you!

jiminabjiminabover 12 years ago
Again

Just read this super story again and I still chuckled at the thought of a dog comming over to babysit. Top marks for entertainment. Jim

Danger09Danger09almost 12 years ago
I loved this story : )

Finally a wife who trusted & knew her husband well enough to know he wouldn't cheat on her! & she didn't do the the stupid slutty shit like most of the women in these stories, ( gangbangs, revenge fucks, attack poor hubby with a cast iron skillet) she talked to her hubby & explained the weird emails , lip stick stains & perfume.... She didn't jump to conclusion... Five stars!

chytownchytownalmost 12 years ago
One Of!!!!

The better ones. Thanks for sharing.

phil2213phil2213about 11 years ago
great story

Logic ruled and it didn't succumb to jealousy and emotion.great job Thank you.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 9 years ago
I love this couple -

They have what it takes and then some -

She had the normal human reacti9ons - she considered her doubts and the possibilities - BUT she had faith and was too smart to be defeated without KNOWING - she also had the faith in him to make him work with her to prove what was happening rather than go all commando on his ass - a much harder thing to do for most of us - we hate confrontation.

They love each other and have the integrity to live properly -

Thanks it is a great story - I would love tp know more RL people like them - I happen to know a couple but far too few.

EgoTrixiEgoTrixiover 9 years ago
TOP entertainment...

really enjoyed re-reading this one. Witty couple, an almost "supernatural" trust for each other and a logically-thinking, truely lovable wife (the kind that usually hard to find) and a smartly developed plot made it a pleasure reading. Thank you for writing it.

calflashcalflashabout 9 years ago
great

great story of a loving couple and how they handled a tough situation.

loveoverlustloveoverlustover 8 years ago
Beauty with Brains. And a heart filled with love to boot.

Well ......what more can a man ask for ?

Wonderful. I really liked it. A story that avoided the usual cheating spouses & the over-the-top emotions & plot devices.

Story telling from the wife's perspective made it more enjoyable.Megan's calm & rationale approach towards the whole situation was an added bonus.

All in all, a truly loving wife tale, where love & trust were the true winners.

It's a 5 all the way.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 8 years ago
So far!

So far one of this author's best stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not a good wife - a GREAT wife!

Many wives would have thrown their husbands out and been filing for divorce by this time. It took a strong women, sure of herself and secure in her love for her husband to put up with this bullshit and finally figure out, coolly and calmly who was trying to undermine her marriage. Good story except she should have taken the babysitter and spanked the hell out of the little bitch.

Gonzo_1965Gonzo_1965over 8 years ago
Nicely Done

Good story showing that all women don't just jump into bed with someone else to get revenge when they get evidence that perhaps their husband is cheating and can talk it through with them and clear things up. Some marriages are good and based on love and trust ... not what you might think if you only read stories on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Proofreader??

Right at the beginning. "It's for seven, so hurry home. The setter will be here at six thirty." Really?? The DOG will be here at six? Please proofread at least. After that had a really hard time getting into the story. In other words you lost this reader before you even got started. Mistakes happen, but please proofread.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good

Nice. Good to know there r still good women or wive out there. Most wife would have gone bat shit crazy over it n probably connive with lawyer(s) to divorce n take him to a cleaner..with out even verifying and go on and revenge fuck with any one flirting with her....especially dumb blonde...but not this one.

We know that mistake 'setter' was meant 'sitter'(baby sitter). If you r too dumb to get that Annon you r an idiot.!:)

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 6 years ago
A Happy Thoughtful Kind Story.....

Hey, thanks for a great change of pace and the suggestion the world does contain some bright, thoughtful, kind people.

laptopwriterlaptopwriterover 6 years ago
I loved it...

A true loving wife; what a concept. :-) 5 well deserved stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
heh

This made my heart beat...once...maybe even twice!

Great story.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Good story

We don't get enough real loving wife stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
really?

You want someone that devious to watch your children?

JustOneMansOpinionJustOneMansOpinionabout 3 years ago

WOW! I loved it. Short but it covered all the bases and was well developed. And best of all it was a real "Loving Wife" story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

If the wife suddenly finds herself unable to breathe or has brake failure while traveling alone in her car, she likely will wish she had fired the little psychopath when she had the chance. Oh well, the kids like her as the babysitter already, so things would work out fine for the new Mrs. Bronson.

MoustacheSmugglerMoustacheSmuggler8 months ago

Short but sweet. Also psychotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Well done. A true loving wife will to protect her marriage. Margie was a nutjob. Last line was funny but not valid when talking about a psycho.

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