All Comments on 'Melanie's Memoirs - A Married Slut 01'

Pay no attention to those disparaging your piece. Lets face it, their comments say a lot more about them than you, or your work of fiction.

This is a very good rendering of a recurring and enjoyable fantasy for many men and women. You've set it well, begun developing an interesting character, and done it all with a good deal of erotic heat. Please, go right ahead with more.

I love the growing sense of compulsion, how one step leads to the next.

One of the best stories i have ever read. Thanks for making me so horny!!!

She no longer loves her husband.

Women don't have Adam's apples.

Maybe this ho ain't a woman.

great fun, well written, well paced.

Super sexy story, nicely written - moving on to Chapter 2 now.