All Comments on 'Melehan & Morvith'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Great story ! My favorite in your new ones.

(My number one favorite all around is My Hero !)

I love those two brothers. They're fun and two perfect characters to identify with.

Also: Sister Einaudi and Darrow ! Glad to see them. I wished there had a bit more personnality though.

I love to see your characters reappear but I'm just worried about who you'll kill (still haven't forgiven for how unceremoniously you killed Celeste)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Love it.

I'd like if more time had been passed on the corruption of the mayor's daughter.

Would have been fun if we had time to know the elf girl more before she was corrupted too.

For example we could have seen her colaborate reluctantly with the son of Morgana a bit more.

But it's great stories, I hope more will come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

The sections involving the orks were pretty hot. Too bad they had to die. Well, most off them, anyway.

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