All Comments on 'Melody's Final Melody?'

As short as it was, it conveyed very well their love for each other. Two lines really stood out for me:

"We are recording this beautiful, intimate event so her melody need never be just a memory."

I really can't express how beautiful this is.

"I have almost always shunned my own pleasure in deference to hers, but tonight, her pleasure is the ONLY thing that matters, for her pleasure will inherently produce that powerful song which may well be Melody's final melody."

That sounds an awful lot like me: caring more about those I love more than myself.

This is one of the most heartfelt, touching pieces I've ever come across. (on a side note, it reminded me a little of River Song / Melody Pond)