All Comments on 'Menage a Trois'

I was a bit mislead as to who the characters really were until the end, so nicely done.

Is there any intelligent life among the "Loving Wives" writers. Nicely done?!? Only if the reader is, themselves, a sicko. Meanwhile, this author should really be seeing a psychologist.

I was disliking it as another cuck/wimp story. Then POW the twist ending. Very clever. Also very revealing. Isn't that how the wimp husbands are treated, like a pet that can be ignored at will?

According to my experience I would accept my companion to have another man, but an affair is out of the question behind my back or cheating is also out, a threesome and friendship I found acceptable as long as it is in the open (I was lucky the threesomes always involved women).

But he coming for dinner in my home, me having to use the spare room...

I think I would turn violent depending on the circumstances.

In this story he knows he's coming if it were me he wouldn't have to, she would be gone period.

I may not have liked this story but who am I to say it was a bad story?

Keep writing I'm sure you're making people happy doing this.

apparently, behind this work. Could any clearer picture of a cuckold be drawn than as a house cat?

The mind of a cat, huh. This was a very nice story! Some of your readers won't get it tho! ;-)

good job !

what an idiot you should have to take an I.Q. test before writing and i'm sure you the author would be chased.

Loved it Very Clever

This turned out to be cute. I'll admit, it came across as the usual wimp, cuckold bemoaning his fate. He can't leave her even though she loves another, right in his own house, in the master bedroom, no less. The writing was technically good, and the story flowed smoothly. Who was to know that the story was told from the point of view of her jealous, pet dog? We the readers don't know until the last few, short paragraphs. Thanks for writing.

Nice twist to the story. At first I was thinking that the man in this story needed some backbone. Then to find out "he" was a cat was genius. I think I'd give 5 stars just for cleverness alone.

Ha Ha Ha Ha-suckered me in good!

Nice Job- LOL!

So I stand corrected. Whiskers must be more than just a dog to her.

Thanks for the fun story

It appears that some of the commenter's did not read the story. I agree that it was a hard story to read. Not the writing but the story line. But if you read the story. You learned that the wife's cat was the story teller as the cat purred on the wife's lap. I did not like the story until the very last and learned that I had been artfully miss lead.

And since when do cats share? My cat thinks she's the Queen of the Universe and the rest of us are here to pander to her. She deigns to allow me to live here so long as I feed her and pet her at her desire. Damn, sounds like my ex-wife!

... that the narator was a pussy. Sorry. I couldn't help myself. Very well done.

the guy should cut his losses and walk away

maybe when she see he has balls she'll stop taking him for granted

at the very least he'd have a chance at finding someone better

I pride myself that I usually catch on quick to sweet little tricks like this, but you really caught me out this time. Really good writing as well by the way.

... you caught me out! Here I was thinking perhaps the interloper was the true husband and the narrator was the "extra" but nooooo.

Applause ... very well done!

Cute. I have a Menage a trois with my wife and my female Cat. I would be interested to know what my female cat thinks of me, except I don't speak Cat.

Yes. You got me too. Artfully done. And I guess the analogy is not too far off the mark!<P>

But OMG do some commentators not even read the story before blasting it? It was very clear AT THE END that Whiskers is a cat. Yes difficult to read because of the subject matter but you owe the author a read BEFORE you comment.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

If you note that there are no sexual overtones in narration you begin to suspect that it might be a child or a pet. But it is so analagous to the wimp cuck scene that some people blew out of here before reaching the end. Really enjoyable, I do believe that the "other" was her husband....

The joke is on me.

But you almost lost me. Depicting the cuckold as a neglected pet is dead on.

The cat being the narrator was a delightful idea (I'd guessed it was a pet rather than a human being - but that didn't take anything away from the story).

As well as the obvious connection between cuckolds and household pets, you've also managed to expose something else: The idiots who write comments - always anonymously of course! - without actually reading the stories. Any suggestion that the male in the story isn't, at the very least, a totally macho (read 'thicko') hero is enough to set them off.

You've done all the writers a service by showing that these stupid and ignorant people are best ignored. Well done!

I thought this story was a nice twist from the norm. Enjoyed it thoroughly.

Talking about the writer. Fuck! Stop writing this shit and kill yourself.

It's just funny...that was the wrtter's intention...

Sorry, anthropomorphism, in my opinion, doesn’t make a very interesting erotic story. One Star.

Took a few minutes to catch on to this one. Pretty inventive and fun.

Great stuff... and I'm laughing my ass off at some of the raging comments here. Clearly, reading comprehension isn't everyone's strong point.

Really clever and very inventive twist which really had me fooled! Kind of like an erotic Sixth Sense lol. I agree with the comments about the comparison you have drawn between a cuckold and a pet. Sometimes analogies are much more powerful than stating something outright, which is the case here imho. You are a very talented writer. Only wish you would write some more stories. I was lmao at the absurdity of the comment saying the author is a faggot and should kill themselves. My guess is this person was outraged at being fooled and took it personally! Its funny how comments can sometimes really highlight the prejudices and lack of intelligence of the people making them.