All Comments on 'Messenger Girl'

Just a self absorb worthless brain dead female, and a brainless male.

Love this story, fun and original.

1*

Garbage tale only enjoyed by the brain dead. Unfortunately, no "0" stars allowed.

I enjoyed this story and I found the concept very erotic. I wish you'd developed it further... I would have liked to see more of an ongoing 'relationship' between Cody and Mackenzie.

I liked the story but found it interesting it was okay for the wife to have two lovers, but not okay for the husband to. Even though the husband never physically touched the other woman.

The dialogue is hard to follow and the characters and situations seem muddy and haphazard. However, you have wit and inventiveness going for you.

Especially when it only goes one way, -5!

anything that could alter the concoction. TK U MLJ LV NV

Too strange for me, just like the author.