All Comments on 'Messy Riding Lessons Ch. 03'

your knowledge / background in this area is obvious

& really helps to carry the story.

totaly agree with the authors "end note"

once you have been sifting shavings or straw to remove the muck & wet

horsey people really do "pong" lol

i've never really minded the "mucking out" ..

although after many years ,

i still hate walking around a paddock / turnout / grazing field with a wheel barrow , picking up droppings .

if you continue this series ( and i hope you do)

stinky, gooey part rotted carrots are something common to most stable yards

:) am sure you could have fun with that idea.

sugar cubes ? apples ?

any chance of us seeing your leading lady compete ,

me thinks a nice Novice dressage test or cross country event would work well

if your leading lady was suitably distracted during the process.

lol would love it if she were caught relieving herself in the back of the trailer & Sarah lowered the ramp , or if in a horsebox a partition moved ,

exposing her to an audience.

perhaps lock her naked in a feedbin, nicely bound.

oats can be dusty & itchy combined with perspiration. mmmm

not sure if it would be appropriate ,

but Nettles can be fun & are rarely mentioned in Literotica storys.

found the description of a Pro Yard

( expensive wash area/heat lamps etc & the grooms flat )

slightly incongruous ,

with the small Livery Yard feel of the indoor school & riding instructor

and that so few other people are ever around during the week in the daytime.

(which would be true of a private small livery yard)

also , can we please have a name for her .

i went back and checked while writing this comment

& can find no mention of her name.

ty for sharing this wonderful story , i really got a kick out of it .

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