by SweetDesire427
Outstanding! The writing is smart (really smart) and clean. Such great phrasing and pace. And I loved the names! Can't wait to read more of your work. Oh. Did I mention the sex? Yeah, that too. Congratulations on a wonderful piece.
Very good story, well written and thought out. Enjoyed it very much, thank you for writing it.
Even among the best writing on this site Meteor Shower is a rare and special addition.
THANK YOU!
It is really encouraging to hear from people who have read this little story. :)
This is quite possibly the best story I have ever read on this site. Amazing job.
How nice to read a well put together story minus the so standard over sized sexual differences and gutter language and best of all written from the feminine viewpoint.
Magical sweet lady.