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SweetDesire427SweetDesire427over 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Glad you liked it!

Gerard_JohnstonGerard_Johnstonover 9 years ago
LOVED it.

Outstanding! The writing is smart (really smart) and clean. Such great phrasing and pace. And I loved the names! Can't wait to read more of your work. Oh. Did I mention the sex? Yeah, that too. Congratulations on a wonderful piece.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
smores?

nice.

thank you.

FarmerJGDFarmerJGDover 9 years ago
Very good

Very good story, well written and thought out. Enjoyed it very much, thank you for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
RARE

Even among the best writing on this site Meteor Shower is a rare and special addition.

THANK YOU!

SweetDesire427SweetDesire427over 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you very much!

It is really encouraging to hear from people who have read this little story. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing Writing

This is quite possibly the best story I have ever read on this site. Amazing job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
*le claps*

Loved this so much! Please write more like it.

OleguyOleguyover 9 years ago
Superb !

How nice to read a well put together story minus the so standard over sized sexual differences and gutter language and best of all written from the feminine viewpoint.

Magical sweet lady.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Love the ending, beautifully written, the stars were a nice touch.

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