All Comments on 'Mickey Gets His'

"Dingle dangle"? Is the central character supposed to be a sheltered 13 year old? Too many things that made it seem that way. Not good.

i loved it :)

the sex in your story is good....if it did'nt appear to be a preteen girl getting it. A little to twisted.

Did absolutely nothing at all for me. Nothing. Except repulse me. Yuck.

I have read some pretty sick stories but this has to be the worst of all. How on this earth did literotica posted such a sick one I will never know. Go back to school and learn how to write stories. I did not even give it a one.

what kind of shit is this? is this suppose to be an erotic story, if it is, I hate to say it left me STONE COLD, I bet a third grader could writer better then this, I may add I did not bother to read any of your other stories, which I an sure follow the same story line, like I mentioned story left me STONE COLD. it is absolutely repulsing.

joey from Canada

....part two soon please.....