All Comments on 'Mid-Life in Crisis: Amy's Story'

love it. Im so glad to see you post a new story

nice. It seems unfinished at some points, but still a great story. 4/5

Well-crafted, but the mechanicals detract from an otherwise really good story. Amy's dialog is near-perfect, I can hear her speaking.

That was a very sexy exciting story! I pumped to it and loved it!! 5/5

Once again you have kept me hooked. What a great storyteller you are. I loved every minute of it. Can't wait to read about Joyce.

Here I sit with a dumb ass grin on my face! Just a great story! Thank you :))

That was an amazing story of love and acceptance. Beautiful. I will look for the other two stories. Thank you

Unique compared to most of what i read. and it was tasteful. Not too much extreme sex, but a nice lovable amount. I really enjoyed it!

You must have the soul of a teenager. While I was reading this story it felt like I was listening to a real teenager. In fact, the way Amy talked it reminded me of a friend of mine when she was a teenager, almost to a tee. Fantastic story, thank you for sharing!

i love Amy and Elspeth, especially the part Amy were leaving Elspeth and back home, it was so sad

I just can't get enough of your stories!

Well done, again!

It needs some revision, and some of the drama is overdone.

However, Amy and especially Elspeth come alive in this story in a way I've rarely seen anywhere else. You can't help but fall in love with both of them and share in their happiness. This is the most beautiful story I've read here.

Well done! Hope you are working on the next installment. Well balanced stories.

Thanks for your hard work in giving us such a great story.

AMAZING!

Wow. Great story.

Wow! I love your love stories! Well written and all the right passages of love! Thank you!

This is my favorite so far. So hot.

The woman that sued McDonald's for her medical bills over their hot coffee had third degree burns from coffee spilled on her clothes which shows the old woman's thinking to be faulty. Otherwise a great story.

sweet, simple and intelligent story.

Its almost a given that the religious nutjob father would rather disown his daughter rather than be happy for her, and in fact I`m rather glad that this wasn`t gone into detail over, although I haven`t read part 3 yet lol.

IF God is real, why do so many die from illness, wars and diseases? Not one religion can answer that. They give the standard "God has a plan" garbage.

How does taking a mother away from a child not yet 3 years old (my own real life story), and leave a distraught father (me 30 years ago) to try and explain why her mother can`t ever see her again, be part of "Gods plan"?

NO ONE should be allowed to be indoctrinated by religion until they are at least 18.

Its child brainwashing and child cruelty and parents should not be allowed to force their own insecurities onto their children.

As for the anon who posted about the McDonalds lawsuit over the coffee incident, I only have to say:- what do you expect, it was stupid Americans!!!!

If you buy coffee you KNOW its fucking hot!!!!!! I would have thrown out what I regard as a frivolous lawsuit, made her pay McDonalds legal fees and told her to grow the fuck up and get a life!!!

I mean, how stupid does it sound? I bought a coffee and didn`t know it was hot. WTF. Only in America thank fuck, although it`ll probably spread worldwide.

Also, the coffee was thrown in the story, the rushing through air would have cooled it slightly, oh plus IT WAS A STORY!!!!!!!

Surely there has to be a deity and this is hell. There is no other explanation for such non-empathetic sputum to exist.

Amy this is a love story between two people and where we find love and who with that is life I am glad you both found each other and enjoying life together and will you have children in the future this is a brilliant well written story and I enjoyed every minute of reading the story fantastic love. xxxxxx

A truly lovely story!

Thank you

Really wish you had released the third part.

A beautiful love story with enough drama to reinforce the strength of the two girls' characters. Regarding Elspeth's father, there is a saying, "those who preach the loudest are often the farthest from God's will." You handled her coming out elegantly. I can't wait to hear her mother's story.