by scribe83
I liked the story, but I couldn't identify with the cold weather setting.
He's just going to leave her there with hardly any clothes in the middle of winter?? Does he have necrophilial tendencies? Because she will most likely have died from hypothermia before he comes back.
He's just going to leave her there with hardly any clothes in the middle of winter?? Does he have necrophilial tendencies? Because she will most likely have died from hypothermia before he comes back.
It's hot, well paced and written and people are worrying about her getting cold? Good work, worth a 2nd story, I feel like I know the characters.
I hope somwhow she gets up and freed....and if there is a next time....hopefully it won't be in the snow but maybe he comes through her dorm window while she is sleeping and surprises her? lol
angelx
...despite the chilly setting.
Very well done, very erotic. I'd like to see more of your stuff.
Very nice, very hot! The only thing that would make it better is a sequal! (did i spell that right?). I like the hat, it's a nice touch.
Best part is when he has her cum for him and call his name - that got me going! :)~
I love that this girl just got raped and everyone's worried about the weather...lol... It's fiction. Imagine she got found two minutes later by someone with a blanket. Story is hot! Loved it!