All Comments on 'Midnight Elevator Ride'

Wham bam thank you ma'am! Sometimes that's what a woman wants. My only criticism of the story was that there was a lot of background information that was irrelevant to the how and when of the sex, which was exquisite by the way! Unless of course these two are going to reappear in more stories, which I am kind of hoping will happen.

Please say there's another chapter... You've given us such a nice detailed description of her, we need to find out about him... Not to mention what they do at her apartment... Hehehe...

Sheooo! Dang that was hot. Nothing like elevator sex with the anticipation that someone will suddenly open the doors on you.

Please do another chapter of these two. And it doesn't even have to be in the elevator.

Now I know why there is so much background information ... of course there is going to be another chapter. Great as always. Look forward to the next chapter. B!

that was hot. just slightly too much background info. when's the next chapter?

Great story! Great balance and interesting characters. It is a challenge to get enough background and character development in to make it more than just a fuck story. And it's easy to go too far and make the sex secondary. Thanks for great effort!

I loved reading that! I need more! Especially a story about what happened once they got to her place!

I actually enjoyed the background information -- it didn't bother me much at all, and I think it flowed perfectly.

Pretty pretty pretty please write another chapter?!

I enjoyed reading your story and found it to be very erotic. Keep writing and sharing.

Dangela