All Comments on 'Midnight Train'

AWESOME! I loved how he was able to read her when she thought she had him pegged..way to GO! Now you have ME begging for more please!

Very good writing, but the ending felt abrupt and weaker than the story deserved. Why on earth-- literally-- would he want to return with her to suburbia? The strange and wonderful has entered her life, but she wants to domesticate it when his great wings could carry them beyond the end of the earth. Your story has taken them to great heights... it should take them to someplace better than McLean, Virginia!

Five stars.