by L. Cadarn
your story rocks but in the end its sucks man, why were you in hurry to finish, cant you just end it the way it shoud be i mean teasing is good,but you cant just left it the way. Boy needs mommy, and what exactly means time to save princess.
Sorry man i loved you through out story, but in the end you pissed me off.
we need another part or proper climax.
The ending left a lot of unanswered questions.
So who was his princess?
I loved the series, it was amazing - I need closure though
not often do you read a story that goes so far off the rails that even the Author wants to just shut it down and walk away
:)
well written series , interesting plot ideas morphed along the way into a debacle.
I skimmed it. It sucks.
Sooo many easily caught grammar mistakes. Lots of problems with homonyms (if you're a very lenient reader).
Plotwise, it makes about as much sense as shit on a stick.
Depravity, well, it's pretty twisted. How people could like this stuff is beyond me. Normally, I'd say to each their own, but fuck that.