All Comments on 'Mighty Morphing Mother Slut Final'

by L. Cadarn

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spbowlspbowlover 14 years ago
great job

Great story but ending just drops off (ie) a happy ending

incestor007incestor007over 14 years ago
NICE but.....

your story rocks but in the end its sucks man, why were you in hurry to finish, cant you just end it the way it shoud be i mean teasing is good,but you cant just left it the way. Boy needs mommy, and what exactly means time to save princess.

Sorry man i loved you through out story, but in the end you pissed me off.

we need another part or proper climax.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
nice story

i liked it except the ending felt a little deus ex-ed

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The ending did not work for me.

The ending left a lot of unanswered questions.

slave_arianaslave_arianaabout 12 years ago
????

So who was his princess?

I loved the series, it was amazing - I need closure though

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
totaly crazy

not often do you read a story that goes so far off the rails that even the Author wants to just shut it down and walk away

:)

well written series , interesting plot ideas morphed along the way into a debacle.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I skimmed it. It sucks.

Sooo many easily caught grammar mistakes. Lots of problems with homonyms (if you're a very lenient reader).

Plotwise, it makes about as much sense as shit on a stick.

Depravity, well, it's pretty twisted. How people could like this stuff is beyond me. Normally, I'd say to each their own, but fuck that.

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