All Comments on 'Mike & Savy Ch. 03'

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saunassaunasover 9 years ago

So beautiful!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I love it can't wait until the next chapter... hopefully the mom will be able to accept their love and not alienate them.

ChasBChasBover 9 years ago
Gentle

Just a bit soft and gentle, but very nice. Some unnecessary "of'"s, but improved writing. We had a bit of Savy's viewpoint in her responses to Mike. 'Will be interested in her side of things, though.

Is mom's shock is because she knows her ex is actually the dad of both, though they don't know it? 'Hope I'm wrong, but...

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
the twist has been

foreshadowed, telegraphed, hinted, and sitting quietly in the background from the moment Savy joined the family. No secrets here, except to the two of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I'm really enjoying this and am surprised I hadn't found this story until so recently. I'm curious to see where it's going now with their mom knowing.

TigersmanTigersmanalmost 9 years ago
Better

This story just keeps getting better and better.

Aussie1951Aussie1951almost 4 years ago
What an amazing story

Incest yes but what a tender loving romantic love story this is so far..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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