by ep703
Wow, lovely ride on the fetish! Thanks for the story, looking forward to finishing the other chapters. :-)
I love the way you completely captured the excitement & the climb of the orgasm. I would love to see more in detail of the jagged edge of the sensations!
I found this aspect very arousing, especially in conjunction with the milking machine, the medical examination table, the term udders, and the treatment. I just commend you for writing like this, it is so well written, perfect I would say. More please!
You are so wonderfully erotic in the way you write. I love the element of domination you have introduced, and the milking machine. I personally would have liked you to have been really sensual and sucked on her breasts first, but you did such a great job over all. Cant wait to read more.